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Sun To Sun...
Through a lens of stolen glances,
I watch from afar,
admiring your tender hearted charm
and brawn arms I call home.
You make me long
to be adored from sun to sun,
our silhouettes
serenading the moon in the midst.
Time be damned
as we get lost in love and lust,
finding ourselves in another day that
has just begun.
To then open my eyes
to hazel irises that create my dulcet
heart song,
and welcome a new sun that's dawned.
.......Oh how you make me long.
Published 13th Apr 2020
| Edited 9th Apr 2024
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13th Apr 2020 2:36am
22nd Apr 2020 3:47pm
13th Apr 2020 3:51am
22nd Apr 2020 3:48pm
Picture is like a pieta (albeit a woman's body in hands of a man, whereas the sculpture's show a male - Jesus' - body in hands of a woman - his mother)and it joins with the painting in suggesting that desire to be held by one's beloved..
9th Apr 2024 6:55pm
13th Apr 2020 11:42am
A beautiful exchange between two spiritual souls nicely composed dear poetess..respect
22nd Apr 2020 3:49pm
22nd Apr 2020 5:57pm
13th Apr 2020 4:55pm
Love this beautiful write. Recently, i had someone tell me that a woman is a piece of art. He is mine now if i want and will meet in two days time in a parking lot in isolation.
And, thank you for the graphic above it too.
And, thank you for the graphic above it too.
22nd Apr 2020 12:46pm
That was gorgeous, and oozing with passion, Pandy. Wonderful writing here <3
22nd Apr 2020 3:51pm
24th Apr 2020 4:36am
Sunrise was never more beautiful than when used as a metaphor by a consummate poet such as you. in this sensual song of love. This swept me into a faraway romantic transcendence that made me dream. There is magic in how you made love into the only truth one needs know. Such lyrical beauty here. I feel an awakening in your soul that cannot be denied. The undeniable power of sensuality is unveiled here like morning on the day of creation.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
28th Apr 2020 00:52am
You are the best commentator and fan ever, John. Your words of praise always fill me with warmth I feel I could never repay as your biggest fan. There is definitely an awakening in my soul, love is alive and breathing more than ever. I appreciate your kindness and presence here in the Deep. 🙏💜
