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You've Changed
You've changed!
Don't you see?
Don't you realize it?
Do you remember?
Can you remember?
Will you remember when?
Was it in your crib?
Was it in first grade?
Was it your first kiss?
When was it that you changed,
that you became like everybody,
that you became everybody else?
Don't you see?
Don't you realize it?
Do you remember?
Can you remember?
Will you remember when?
Was it in your crib?
Was it in first grade?
Was it your first kiss?
When was it that you changed,
that you became like everybody,
that you became everybody else?
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Re. You've Changed
12th Apr 2020 11:57am
good morning Takis awesome write
it's interesting I just posted a write about not fitting in
I don't think I'll ever be one of the crowd...
wonderful ❤
it's interesting I just posted a write about not fitting in
I don't think I'll ever be one of the crowd...
wonderful ❤
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Re: Re. You've Changed
15th Apr 2020 9:48am
Re. You've Changed
12th Apr 2020 9:28pm
Hopefully never for some of us. Excellent write takis .
cheers,
buddhakitty.
cheers,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. You've Changed
15th Apr 2020 9:51am
Re. You've Changed
15th Apr 2020 8:56am
Damn, Takis... this one hits to the core. One thing I never want to be, just like everyone else :\
We all want to think we're special don't we? LOL
Loved this write... very thought provoking.
We all want to think we're special don't we? LOL
Loved this write... very thought provoking.
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Re: Re. You've Changed
15th Apr 2020 9:54am
Re: Re. You've Changed
15th Apr 2020 10:01am
Re. You've Changed
16th Apr 2020 10:55am
Re. You've Changed
Anonymous
24th Apr 2020 8:19am
If you mean everyone seems to be an idiot, I would say it's the school system. Bringing everyone down to the retards level. Thought provoking.
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Re: Re. You've Changed
24th Apr 2020 9:29am
Your interpretation is as good as any!
Thank you for your read and comment!
Appreciated!
Thank you for your read and comment!
Appreciated!
Re. You've Changed
27th May 2020 6:55am
I never have , my friend...
I am told that all the time...
They ask me which world I come from , and I am so glad !
I am told that all the time...
They ask me which world I come from , and I am so glad !
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16th Aug 2021 2:14pm
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