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Siren
Please stop calling my name
in your dreams
Because I always wake up
from mine
crying
in your dreams
Because I always wake up
from mine
crying
Published 10th Apr 2020
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©All rights reserved Ana Schwarz
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10th Apr 2020 7:45pm
Face your demons and why someone is calling your name and it make feel better. Great poem. Keep on writing.
10th Apr 2020 8:15pm
12th Apr 2020 1:32am
Dear A,
This piece has got me to thinking about a past relationship that had me so angry- we couldn’t even break up right. He was such a putz and yet the devastation was crippling. Took quite a bit of time to let it go but he remained a ghost for many years in the back of my mind. Very admirable piece invoking a lot of memories that need purging. Well penned! H🌷
This piece has got me to thinking about a past relationship that had me so angry- we couldn’t even break up right. He was such a putz and yet the devastation was crippling. Took quite a bit of time to let it go but he remained a ghost for many years in the back of my mind. Very admirable piece invoking a lot of memories that need purging. Well penned! H🌷
12th Apr 2020 5:21pm
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22nd Apr 2020 1:01pm
Awww... that was very touching in its intense brevity. Powerful emotions...
Thank you for sharing that with us, Ana!
Thank you for sharing that with us, Ana!
