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A Kiss Goodbye
The last time that I kissed you needing tissue quickly followed
Face so cold, devoid of soul, from your body being hollowed
It took years for me to swallow that you're no longer here
I bawled like a child for quite a while, dropping innumerable tears
My greatest fear came to fruition causing bouts of depression
A nonslip vice grip placed my heart under compression
Until poetic expression became my weapon of choice
Finding a way to convey with my newfound voice
Face so cold, devoid of soul, from your body being hollowed
It took years for me to swallow that you're no longer here
I bawled like a child for quite a while, dropping innumerable tears
My greatest fear came to fruition causing bouts of depression
A nonslip vice grip placed my heart under compression
Until poetic expression became my weapon of choice
Finding a way to convey with my newfound voice
Published 10th Apr 2020
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10th Apr 2020 12:21pm
10th Apr 2020 2:26pm
11th Apr 2020 9:25am
Sometimes that last goodbye holds more memories then all your thoughts combine it's the part that stays in your heart and soul the longest over time..respect brother
10th Apr 2020 2:28pm
I'm glad that you found an outlet for your expression. Very expressive, and flowed very well. I really like those last four lines... Loving the multi-syllable rhymes. I'm not sure who this is about, but it's touching...
P.s. that's a pretty cool picture you chose to go with this one too ;)
P.s. that's a pretty cool picture you chose to go with this one too ;)
10th Apr 2020 2:56pm
Thank you NB. This poem is about the passing of my grandmother who died in 2014. The loss of her is what started me on this poetic journey. I'd never written poetry prior to losing her. Now it's become my coping mechanism for all things life throws my way. I love the photo too. I was searching to find something that would go well with the poem and chose this one immediately after seeing it. Glad it resonated with you too.
10th Apr 2020 7:02pm
Damon...line 7 ? I think you meant to say you cried (bawled)...rather than (balled), which is slang for the sex act... at least in the USA.
That said...I do like your poem... Well done...Beautifully expressed...amigo. Hugz, Ely
That said...I do like your poem... Well done...Beautifully expressed...amigo. Hugz, Ely
10th Apr 2020 7:38pm
