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erase
Erase
Her from this pain
for in this demo’s home she has no escape
from the tortures rage
she clutches her fists with anger and rage
for they adore watching her screaming in pain
she is engulfed by their hate an in this madding rage
there is no escape within this demo’s home she’ll remain
the cuts the bruises all look the same
as she vanishes within the blood stains
Wishing to be erased
Her from this pain
for in this demo’s home she has no escape
from the tortures rage
she clutches her fists with anger and rage
for they adore watching her screaming in pain
she is engulfed by their hate an in this madding rage
there is no escape within this demo’s home she’ll remain
the cuts the bruises all look the same
as she vanishes within the blood stains
Wishing to be erased
Published 10th Jan 2012
| Edited 17th Jan 2012
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10th Jan 2012 10:13pm
the emotion carried me thru the entire poem. i felt as i was reading that certain words were misspelled or not properly edited. it wasn't enough to distract me from the idea but it did effect the way i absorb your message (Demos')???? have to look that one up :) (or did you mean demon's?) some sentence breaks were unneeded, where other places could use a rest...
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