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Young Heart

Young soul's
First attachment  
Lacks experience  
Loves hard  
Falls harder  
  
Easily influenced  
Guilt ridden  
Modifies behaviour  
Acknowledgement sort  
Partners attitude, unchanged  
   
Tries Harder  
Reforms habits  
Demands reassurance  
Little reaction  
Young soul confused by her lovers absence  
   
Tempers flare  
Arguments "normal"  
Vulnerabilities exposed  
Her fault  
Manipulated, responsibility taken  
   
Partnership unbalanced  
Buttons pushed  
Arguments fostered.  
Heartache overwhelms  
Unable to breathe speaking her name  
   
Ultimate eruption  
Rejects break-up  
her ex-partner,    
moves away  
Attempted, space to grow  
   
Heart broken  
Lost for words  
Release impossible
Questions why...    
Doesn't she love me?    
   
Becomes obsessed  
Warped reality  
Self doubt  
Seeks help  
Young soul desires life change  
   
Cyclic behavior    
Five years  
Lost herself    
Fear all-consuming  
Young soul now alone, but is she?  
   
Unrecognised strength  
Beauty deep within  
Reminders necessary  
Cages self  
Frightened, a chameleon keeping peace  
   
Her reminder  
Always loved  
Support unconditional  
Open Door  
Forever welcome in!
Written by JOY (Joybell)
Published | Edited 7th Apr 2020
Author's Note
A very special friend, who is a "young soul" is grieving the loss of her first true love and finding it difficult to let go. I wrote this poem from her.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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