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I love you
When you write,
I feel your passion;
when we kiss, I feel it too.
Nothing can compare to
how I feel when I'm with you.
With your lips so close to mine,
I feel a tingle down my spine.
Hearts are racing, hands are shaking:
A taste of the divine.
The smile on your precious face
is a blessing from above.
A reminder that despite our pain,
there is everlasting love.
I know that you won't always like me,
and the things I do or say,
but I hope that you'll still love me
at the end of everyday.
I feel your passion;
when we kiss, I feel it too.
Nothing can compare to
how I feel when I'm with you.
With your lips so close to mine,
I feel a tingle down my spine.
Hearts are racing, hands are shaking:
A taste of the divine.
The smile on your precious face
is a blessing from above.
A reminder that despite our pain,
there is everlasting love.
I know that you won't always like me,
and the things I do or say,
but I hope that you'll still love me
at the end of everyday.
Published 1st Apr 2020
| Edited 2nd Apr 2020
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1st Apr 2020 9:47pm
1st Apr 2020 10:06pm
2nd Apr 2020 4:13am
Dear NB,
This is such a sweet piece. Its gentle rhyme lends itself to an almost prayer-like quality. “I know that you won't always like me,
and the things I do or say,
but I hope that you'll still love me
at the end of everyday.” how often I’ve felt this. Excellent summation of relationships.
A lovely write. H🌷
This is such a sweet piece. Its gentle rhyme lends itself to an almost prayer-like quality. “I know that you won't always like me,
and the things I do or say,
but I hope that you'll still love me
at the end of everyday.” how often I’ve felt this. Excellent summation of relationships.
A lovely write. H🌷
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Anonymous
2nd Apr 2020 12:28pm
Very beautiful. your beloved is very lucky.
2nd Apr 2020 2:05pm
Loving someone can be very blessed. ..sometimes it's painful...
Nicely written.
Love
Jasmine
Nicely written.
Love
Jasmine
3rd Apr 2020 1:59am
So lovely...Classic ....
It reads like the tender love when experienced the first time....
It reads like the tender love when experienced the first time....
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Anonymous
2nd May 2020 2:43am
Awe NB.......this is a beautiful tribute to your luv.......heart kissing ink.......enjoyed this very much......,purple luv & hugs xo :)
