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Dimensions
You take the fifth
distilled and delusional
drunk, disorderly and disrobed
fallen to your knees you plea
and pretty pretty plead
your prayers
to multiple dimensions
boots made of stone
you can't run
no directions nor diversions
you can't hide
naked
you abide
songs ring softly in your head
you're alive but somehow dead
life's flashes of brilliance
seem less brilliant
light walks away from you
but you're not through
darkness beckons your pain
in a devil disguised as a saint
you pass judgement
and delve into his realm
as he deepens his hold
you attack and then retreat
regroup then repeat
you succumb and sacrifice your lamb,
your virtues and the sheep
you awaken from this sleep
blinking blankly
and wander on
distilled and delusional
drunk, disorderly and disrobed
fallen to your knees you plea
and pretty pretty plead
your prayers
to multiple dimensions
boots made of stone
you can't run
no directions nor diversions
you can't hide
naked
you abide
songs ring softly in your head
you're alive but somehow dead
life's flashes of brilliance
seem less brilliant
light walks away from you
but you're not through
darkness beckons your pain
in a devil disguised as a saint
you pass judgement
and delve into his realm
as he deepens his hold
you attack and then retreat
regroup then repeat
you succumb and sacrifice your lamb,
your virtues and the sheep
you awaken from this sleep
blinking blankly
and wander on
Published 1st Apr 2020
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Anonymous
1st Apr 2020 2:23pm
Oh I'm going to enjoy unraveling the layers in this one...
1st Apr 2020 2:49pm
1st Apr 2020 2:32pm
ooooooooooh
i would love to get into your head with a spork & crazy straw...
.... this is a kick-ass start
wishing you ooooooooodles ov creativity & fun during this month's challenge
much love
~ kat
✒️🖤
i would love to get into your head with a spork & crazy straw...
.... this is a kick-ass start
wishing you ooooooooodles ov creativity & fun during this month's challenge
much love
~ kat
✒️🖤
1st Apr 2020 2:51pm
Lol, thanks
You might get lost in there and what ever you do, DON'T OPEN THE RED DOOR 🖤
You might get lost in there and what ever you do, DON'T OPEN THE RED DOOR 🖤
1st Apr 2020 3:33pm
must admit this floored me today. just the utterly masterful flow.
the first stanza...'disrobed' one in the whirly current until the blank snap of waking to another day.
gorgeous writing.
the first stanza...'disrobed' one in the whirly current until the blank snap of waking to another day.
gorgeous writing.
1st Apr 2020 3:38pm
1st Apr 2020 3:57pm
Wonderful rhyming
and pace to this imaginative spill, Brother
off & running, now
no turning back!!
and pace to this imaginative spill, Brother
off & running, now
no turning back!!
1st Apr 2020 4:00pm
2nd Apr 2020 12:17pm
I have been amazed at the offerings this year! This is no exception, and it's only day one! Way to throw down some verse, Tim! Enjoyed.
Anonymous
10th Apr 2020 9:43pm
I really love this "darkness beckons your pain
in a devil disguised as a saint
you pass judgement
and delve into his realm
as he deepens his hold"
I found that quite meaningful but I loved it all.
in a devil disguised as a saint
you pass judgement
and delve into his realm
as he deepens his hold"
I found that quite meaningful but I loved it all.
10th Apr 2020 9:51pm
