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Deep Underground
( a Tribute that tells a story through poem titles from 21 Deep members )
It’s now one year forward since the scourge;
Comes the dawning of the first new Light
Through a crimson sky, the colours of time.
We are no different despite the purge.
The cleansing of being tethered flight
Beyond of what seemed to be a lifetime.
Lockdown cities, street by empty street,
Isolation by isolation,
Considered a privilege if we survived.
A hint of sadness, we’ll never meet,
Emerged from charity sedations.
But almost harmless doesn’t mean we tried.
Almost wanted had a second chance
If you’re bracing for the unveiling;
It’s just enough to make you stay alive.
A wild child in moonlight for this dance,
The hum that ripples a song failing,
Here Nature is speaking to save her hive.
The 21 Deep members whose poem titles
(in italics, picked at random from current pages
of My Updates) my poetic ink honours:
^buddhakitty - one year forward
^MadameLavender - The Dawning
^Wanderer_Mahmud - Crimson Sky
^Josh - Colours of Time
^Stoney223 - We Are No Different
^adagio - of being
^EdibleWords - Beyond
^Kaylor1967 - Empty
^ImperfectedStone - Isolation
^Wh1skeySwagger - Isolation
^NewBeginnings - Privilege
^SweetOblivion - A hint of sadness
^lilies_and_dust - charity
^Sky_dancer - Almost Harmless
^Honoria - Almost Wanted
^FromTheAsh - bracing for the unveiling
^Rubiksmind91 - Just enough to make you stay
^gothicsurrealism - A wild child in moonlight
^calamitygin - This dance
^_boybrains - the hum that ripples a song
^jemac - Nature is speaking
It’s now one year forward since the scourge;
Comes the dawning of the first new Light
Through a crimson sky, the colours of time.
We are no different despite the purge.
The cleansing of being tethered flight
Beyond of what seemed to be a lifetime.
Lockdown cities, street by empty street,
Isolation by isolation,
Considered a privilege if we survived.
A hint of sadness, we’ll never meet,
Emerged from charity sedations.
But almost harmless doesn’t mean we tried.
Almost wanted had a second chance
If you’re bracing for the unveiling;
It’s just enough to make you stay alive.
A wild child in moonlight for this dance,
The hum that ripples a song failing,
Here Nature is speaking to save her hive.
The 21 Deep members whose poem titles
(in italics, picked at random from current pages
of My Updates) my poetic ink honours:
^buddhakitty - one year forward
^MadameLavender - The Dawning
^Wanderer_Mahmud - Crimson Sky
^Josh - Colours of Time
^Stoney223 - We Are No Different
^adagio - of being
^EdibleWords - Beyond
^Kaylor1967 - Empty
^ImperfectedStone - Isolation
^Wh1skeySwagger - Isolation
^NewBeginnings - Privilege
^SweetOblivion - A hint of sadness
^lilies_and_dust - charity
^Sky_dancer - Almost Harmless
^Honoria - Almost Wanted
^FromTheAsh - bracing for the unveiling
^Rubiksmind91 - Just enough to make you stay
^gothicsurrealism - A wild child in moonlight
^calamitygin - This dance
^_boybrains - the hum that ripples a song
^jemac - Nature is speaking
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 25th Mar 2020
Author's Note
For EdibleWords’ “Warm-up-Competition Competition”.
Feel better, Mama Bear! <3
Feel better, Mama Bear! <3
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Re. Deep Underground
25th Mar 2020 7:41pm
I am deeply honor with all my respect dear poetess...Thank You very much one love Stoney223
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25th Mar 2020 7:48pm
A masterpiece well spiritually spoken indeed from the depth of the heart and soul and mind..Respect
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Re. Deep Underground
25th Mar 2020 8:46pm
Nicely done Jadey, very clever the way you used the titles in this poem but then you have mastered the art of writing so well :)
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25th Mar 2020 8:58pm
Oh my, thank you, Layla, but you’re being far too kind, al though I always enjoy your company. Please take care - it’s been an especially cold world out there these days.🙏🏻
Jade🐾
Jade🐾
Re. Deep Underground
25th Mar 2020 9:33pm
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You’re very welcome, Jess... and thank YOU.
I’m glad you’re getting better, Yaaaay!
🎈
🐾
😺
I’m glad you’re getting better, Yaaaay!
🎈
🐾
😺
Re. Deep Underground
25th Mar 2020 9:58pm
So very beautiful and cleverly puzzled together. Humbled and honored to be part of such a wonderfully crafted piece.
Thank you Jade xo
Thank you Jade xo
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26th Mar 2020 11:08am
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26th Mar 2020 1:44pm
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26th Mar 2020 1:57pm
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I’m sorry you have now flown away, ma fille, back up into the sky where you are safe and are dancing among the clouds.🙏🏻
Hoping we will meet again one day.
Jade tiger🐾
Hoping we will meet again one day.
Jade tiger🐾
Re. Deep Underground
26th Mar 2020 5:31pm
oh wow, this is so beautiful
thank you so much for the feature ♥
you're truly amazing
thank you so much for the feature ♥
you're truly amazing
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Thank you for your kind words, dear Ana. And it’s due to artistic works by a site member such as yourself that helped make my verse express exist as it now appears.
Take care & be safe,
always
Jade🐾
Take care & be safe,
always
Jade🐾
Re. Deep Underground
26th Mar 2020 8:25pm
Totally and completely AWESOME, Jade.
biggest hugs,
an old rolly polly buddhakitty.
biggest hugs,
an old rolly polly buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. Deep Underground
26th Mar 2020 8:37pm
Ohhh, many humble thanks, dear Kitty...
to emerge in all of those warm ( ( (hugs) ) )
ever xo
Jade🐾
to emerge in all of those warm ( ( (hugs) ) )
ever xo
Jade🐾
Re. Deep Underground
27th Mar 2020 2:29am
Dear JP,
A deep curtsy and very honored to be included in the presence of so many talented poets! This is a fantastic and clever work. Best of luck! And, thank you once again.
H 🌷
A deep curtsy and very honored to be included in the presence of so many talented poets! This is a fantastic and clever work. Best of luck! And, thank you once again.
H 🌷
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27th Mar 2020 8:57am
You’re so welcome, dear Honoria, though I’m so clever. I couldn’t help but immerse myself in such a project to show my appreciation. The honor of it.🙏🏻
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🐾
Re. Deep Underground
27th Mar 2020 2:37am
I'm greatly honoured & to see such a beautiful piece right after waking up, I'm sure my day will be brightened up just like your writing.
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You’re so very welcome, dear Mahmudul, for it was truly an honour for me.🙏🏻
Be well & strong,
ever
Jade🐾
Be well & strong,
ever
Jade🐾
Re. Deep Underground
27th Mar 2020 3:10am
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27th Mar 2020 7:33am
Very clever Jade
Well put together
I am honored to be a part of this beautiful piece
Well put together
I am honored to be a part of this beautiful piece
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28th Mar 2020 6:19pm
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31st Mar 2020 1:26am
What a lovely piece and done so strategically. It's quite the honor for these poets to have their works mentioned in your verse.
Bravo Ms. Jade.
Bravo Ms. Jade.
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31st Mar 2020 2:05am
Thank you kindly, Wally, for your kibd words. And the way I have felt since it came to me to do a tribute poem, the honor was and has been mine. I would like to have included more members, but I was choosing titles from the first 3 most current pages from My Updates and it’s only after I had a full list did I see who wrote which piece. I picked the title in just a few minutes which was how they all ended up in their places in a poem I had yet to write.🙂
Re. Deep Underground
6th Apr 2020 11:57am
And to TeriyakiSuicide... thank you for your friendship & support while you were here. Perhaps one day we may meet again🙏🏻