deepundergroundpoetry.com
notes: landscape engines. 1817-1819 Woodhouse
Published 19th Mar 2020
Author's Note
An old reworked poem in visual form.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 7
reading list entries 5
comments 4
reads 591
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
19th Mar 2020 3:40pm
20th Mar 2020 3:46pm
You have a singular ability with the abstract and yet intimate, the detailed metaphors are gorgeous, such as the bared piano teeth, it flourishes before the mind's eye with more than clarity, but with living spirit. Creativity and originality abounding. Flow and suspense in terrific proportion. I've been over it several times and will go over it several more before I move on.
23rd Mar 2020 10:44pm
Daniel hit the nail on my own responses head
Intimate while abstract
The atmosphere thick, sounds, smells
The title, omg.....lends to all of this ....like a movie score written by Trent Reznor
Intimate while abstract
The atmosphere thick, sounds, smells
The title, omg.....lends to all of this ....like a movie score written by Trent Reznor
24th Mar 2020 9:58am
Thank you so much. I absolutely love the Trent Reznor reference.
I still feel pretty new here and am so glad to have discovered your writing.
again honored and appreciated.
I still feel pretty new here and am so glad to have discovered your writing.
again honored and appreciated.
