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Test Your Dream
Warmly welcome
the mind of Nick Herbert
into your own
with poetryology
(Yes, I made that up!)
the chemistry
of your reality
is not a fantasy
Psychoanalyze God
with reverence
if you do dare
at your present
state of grace
Have faith in
cold fusion
Collide observations;
collapse to particles
in your dangerous wisdom
and eternal intentions
A quantum romance theory;
mushy mathematical mumblings
Is it better
to guess badly
than to never wonder?
So drive your toy hunches
through our consciousness;
a sandbox for little thinkers
Innerspace metaphor
for humanity's eye
in our loving drivers
Maverick, is it,
that minds entangle
leaving nothing
unobserved...
So make observations;
test your dreams...
your reality
the mind of Nick Herbert
into your own
with poetryology
(Yes, I made that up!)
the chemistry
of your reality
is not a fantasy
Psychoanalyze God
with reverence
if you do dare
at your present
state of grace
Have faith in
cold fusion
Collide observations;
collapse to particles
in your dangerous wisdom
and eternal intentions
A quantum romance theory;
mushy mathematical mumblings
Is it better
to guess badly
than to never wonder?
So drive your toy hunches
through our consciousness;
a sandbox for little thinkers
Innerspace metaphor
for humanity's eye
in our loving drivers
Maverick, is it,
that minds entangle
leaving nothing
unobserved...
So make observations;
test your dreams...
your reality
Written by
EdibleWords
Published 19th Mar 2020
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Re. Test Your Dream
19th Mar 2020 5:22am
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Re. Test Your Dream
19th Mar 2020 6:07am
This is well done, Jess. I’ll read it several more times as I digest.
One friendly suggestion: loose those two eclipses, you don’t need them, and don’t need to put anything in their place.
Good luck in the comp, MB. x
🐾
One friendly suggestion: loose those two eclipses, you don’t need them, and don’t need to put anything in their place.
Good luck in the comp, MB. x
🐾
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Re. Test Your Dream
19th Mar 2020 8:23am
a nicely inspirational set of verses - if Shakespeare can invent words, then you can too
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19th Mar 2020 10:09pm
💖Very supportive! Thank you.💖
Shakespeare.... the first known written instance of "Jessica" ...was him. My name, lol!
Shakespeare.... the first known written instance of "Jessica" ...was him. My name, lol!
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19th Mar 2020 9:54am
Love the originality of this ... the crafting of new words ... my fav thing to do ... excellent write my dear ... a definite keeper ...
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Which reminds me.... I gotta go through your stuff! 💖💖💖🙏😎
You guys are definitely stimulating new ideas in me! I wanna see your new words! 👀
You guys are definitely stimulating new ideas in me! I wanna see your new words! 👀
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20th Mar 2020 2:17pm
I said to myself.... I see her... she knows I'm gonna goof around.... then she'll respond, lol!