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Tiptoeing Along the Brink of Insanity
Drifting through my subconscious
My darkest thoughts start to surface
Have I really lost it all?
Did I ever have it in the first place?
Am I insane or just misunderstood?
Trapped in my own unhinged mind
Is sanity something I will ever find?
11/21/19
(c) Sean Paul Gillum
My darkest thoughts start to surface
Have I really lost it all?
Did I ever have it in the first place?
Am I insane or just misunderstood?
Trapped in my own unhinged mind
Is sanity something I will ever find?
11/21/19
(c) Sean Paul Gillum
Published 18th Mar 2020
Author's Note
I felt a little off and wanted to write a short poem about it
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20th Mar 2020 1:14am
You aren't alone, buddy. Sanity is all a matter of perspective and expectation. I think we all feel a bit crazy sometimes.
Anyway, I liked this expressive poem. Keep up the great work!
Anyway, I liked this expressive poem. Keep up the great work!
20th Mar 2020 1:16am
Thank you very much, I've always felt alone with this burden but it looks like I have good company in you.
26th Mar 2020 4:27am
Everyone is here to help. You have to face the darkness inside you to come out through the light. Jeep on writing.
