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Build Up
My body heat will start to peak
Next thing I know my knees go weak..
I take a breath to brace myself
for if I don't I know I'll melt..
I feel our hearts dance to a song
I could repeat all night long..
When your hands reach my skin
I feel the spark from deep within..
As your eyes reach my soul
I lose my strength of self-control..
In that moment my lips make way
for the cum that breaks away..
Panties soaked no holding back
I want you now your mouth I lack..
Tiffany 03.9.2020
Next thing I know my knees go weak..
I take a breath to brace myself
for if I don't I know I'll melt..
I feel our hearts dance to a song
I could repeat all night long..
When your hands reach my skin
I feel the spark from deep within..
As your eyes reach my soul
I lose my strength of self-control..
In that moment my lips make way
for the cum that breaks away..
Panties soaked no holding back
I want you now your mouth I lack..
Tiffany 03.9.2020
Published 12th Mar 2020
| Edited 27th Oct 2022
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Anonymous
12th Mar 2020 7:46am
Love the build up to panties soaked ending 🔥👌
12th Mar 2020 3:06pm
12th Mar 2020 3:07pm
12th Mar 2020 8:51am
12th Mar 2020 3:07pm
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- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
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10th Feb 2021 4:44am
26th Feb 2022 7:01pm
A simple way the emotions builds up and take you to the apex. I love this clean erotic poem.
Love,
KS
Love,
KS
26th Feb 2022 7:06pm
I like the flow of this one. Very well written. You certainly creates an atmosphere of desire. And you seem to thread the needle quite well as far as writing risqué but not going too far. I’m looking forward to reading more of your work!
2nd Jul 2022 7:33pm
31st Mar 2024 8:44am
The anticipation, whether through words or imagination, is always a great build up to a climatic ending that leaves both the writer and reader satisifed.
Nicely done.
Nicely done.
