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Longerstill
I wouldn't mind speaking
if I knew how to navigate this feeling
but I don't, never did,
it always ended the same -
my silence becomes our protection.
if I knew how to navigate this feeling
but I don't, never did,
it always ended the same -
my silence becomes our protection.
Published 28th Feb 2020
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28th Feb 2020 7:20pm
I love the simplicity of this.
One syntax suggestion:
my deep silence becomes
a protection for us.
It read a bit awkward as it is for me ( but I'm dyslexic, so . . . )
One syntax suggestion:
my deep silence becomes
a protection for us.
It read a bit awkward as it is for me ( but I'm dyslexic, so . . . )
