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Libidinous
I'm old
Still horny
And 70 plus
Sensual
Libidinous
Oh Knight
Dragon slayer
Where you
Passionately
Drag me away
To a secret night
Kiss my lips
Taste my spit
Tongue exploiting
Run fingers through
Crown of white hair
Grab handful
Pulling
Touch my face
Gaze into my eyes
Admire me
Let me feel
Wanton desire
Permeate my being
Unclothe me
Piece by piece
Slow methodical
Massaging
Teasing and tasting
Hunger growing
Your mouth
Engaging my breasts
Suckling
As a child
Needing sustenance
Spread me
Feel my little girl
Explore and discover
Who I am
Open me
Enter me
Pierce me
Fill my emptiness
With hardened desire
Slow and easy
Feeling you inside
Soothingly sliding
Sweet wetness
Dripping from within
Grabbing my behind
Raising me up
Greasing me
Head pushing
Pain of lust
Like when a kid
In my uncle's bed
Filling me
From behind
Rearrange me
Again and again
Ascending time and space
Til we explode
In mid air
Descending
Lulled by
Heightened senses
Breathing fast
Breathing deep
A rhythmic dance
To repeat
Still horny
And 70 plus
Sensual
Libidinous
Oh Knight
Dragon slayer
Where you
Passionately
Drag me away
To a secret night
Kiss my lips
Taste my spit
Tongue exploiting
Run fingers through
Crown of white hair
Grab handful
Pulling
Touch my face
Gaze into my eyes
Admire me
Let me feel
Wanton desire
Permeate my being
Unclothe me
Piece by piece
Slow methodical
Massaging
Teasing and tasting
Hunger growing
Your mouth
Engaging my breasts
Suckling
As a child
Needing sustenance
Spread me
Feel my little girl
Explore and discover
Who I am
Open me
Enter me
Pierce me
Fill my emptiness
With hardened desire
Slow and easy
Feeling you inside
Soothingly sliding
Sweet wetness
Dripping from within
Grabbing my behind
Raising me up
Greasing me
Head pushing
Pain of lust
Like when a kid
In my uncle's bed
Filling me
From behind
Rearrange me
Again and again
Ascending time and space
Til we explode
In mid air
Descending
Lulled by
Heightened senses
Breathing fast
Breathing deep
A rhythmic dance
To repeat
Published 24th Feb 2020
| Edited 25th Feb 2020
Author's Note
I liven in fairy tales dreamily wondering by we as humans have become so uptight, closed and cannot find the key. To be able to be truly free, is a gift worth searching and cherishing.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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24th Feb 2020 6:16pm
some write hit the heart and soul even at 70 plus now this my kind of sweet sexy lady
hora sweet lady
hora sweet lady
24th Feb 2020 6:54pm
Thank you for the wonderful comment. Do you think it flowed, does it make sense?
24th Feb 2020 9:11pm
25th Feb 2020 00:11am
24th Feb 2020 9:40pm
I am all for being able to enjoy sex in later life (speaking as now 60 yr old), I liked this frank write, You paint a scene easy to imagine.
25th Feb 2020 00:14am
Thank you for your comment. So you think the wording was ok and created imagery?
25th Feb 2020 6:30am
Yes, and I like the short lines which encourage one to read the poem savouringly. I could imagine you reading it out on audio.
14th Mar 2020 4:23pm
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25th Feb 2020 5:48pm
Thank you for your comment. I understand that we may be few and far between. So let's hang onto it.
25th Feb 2020 11:50pm
I am brand new this forum (minutes ago). I was trying to find something like a Haiku flavor, in this piece and it may not be there. My university humanities course to fill in the engineering degree requirement was a disastrous semester of free-form poetry, where the instructor regularly hemorrhaged her comments on my papers. She gave me a barely passing grade. And I gave her the very naked middle finger.
If I have a strength, it appears to be in Limerick or my own, expanded structure of Haiku, 7,7,9,7,7 syllables with A,A,B,C,C rhyme scheme. We will see how this will plays, against the scrutiny of the masses.
However, before they eviscerate me, may I send you my current one for your evaluation, in return? This structure sees akin to what you have written, but with clear rhyme, rhythm and pattern.
If I have a strength, it appears to be in Limerick or my own, expanded structure of Haiku, 7,7,9,7,7 syllables with A,A,B,C,C rhyme scheme. We will see how this will plays, against the scrutiny of the masses.
However, before they eviscerate me, may I send you my current one for your evaluation, in return? This structure sees akin to what you have written, but with clear rhyme, rhythm and pattern.
28th Feb 2020 9:13am
14th Mar 2020 4:17pm
Wow! I commend you for articulating such a perfect painting and depiction of a captivating erotic image in my mind. It was incredibly stimulating immersing myself into your writings as the protagonist. I felt empowered by the descriptive controlling power the Knight Dragon Slayer had over your passions and desires. Then I felt Vulnerable to be held in your bosom and latching onto you as your defenseless Suckling. These contrasting emotions are seductive and romantic. The Climax is perfectly portrayed as we both are Equally satisfied in lock step like a flawless Rhythmic Dance as you eloquently describe......aMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMazing Read!!!!
Well damn, hell yes. Where do you live? Ha ha. On a more serious note, thank you for your
lovely, poetic remarks. I really do appreciate it. I love the insight as the suckling being defenseless.
lovely, poetic remarks. I really do appreciate it. I love the insight as the suckling being defenseless.
3rd Jun 2020 5:59am
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5th Jun 2020 2:38pm
This poem describes precisely the behavior and passion of my dreamed lady. Even more invites me to imagine and look forward to this imaginary 70s Lady. Elsiesan you really invite to the pleasure of discover life with a lady as the one described in your poem
5th Jun 2020 2:58pm
