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vows
remember?
all those bullshit, "forever,"
words we would say to each
other
the movie ending sunsets
that we would ride off
into
riding each other with the
fire of comets...
vowing
all for better or worse
all for better or
worse
the worse came
and the better
no longer
mattered
Published 23rd Feb 2020
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23rd Feb 2020 11:38pm
Solid write.
The better never matters when people are done, its almost like the better never
existed.
The better never matters when people are done, its almost like the better never
existed.
24th Feb 2020 1:24am
Sadly, that seems to be a great truth in relationships. Thanks nik.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
24th Feb 2020 2:13am
Dear BK,
I sure do remember. And now I want to know what the point of taking them is if you’re not going to defend them. Yuck, what a quagmire. Your write is spot on, well timed and well written. So appreciated! H🌷
I sure do remember. And now I want to know what the point of taking them is if you’re not going to defend them. Yuck, what a quagmire. Your write is spot on, well timed and well written. So appreciated! H🌷
24th Feb 2020 2:25am
I'm sorry you are experiencing what you are experiencing, Honoria. I feel for you.
Here if you need to chat.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Here if you need to chat.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
24th Feb 2020 11:12am
24th Feb 2020 12:47pm
