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Hopeful Love
Your breath
Is the air
To my lungs
Need you
To live
You face
A portrait
Of everlasting beauty
Framed before
My adoring eyes
Your lips
Their fullness
Inviting
Boundless desire
From within me
My wandering wind
Of a soul
Caught
In the vortex
Of this storm
Whirling smoke
Of burning passion
Smouldering heart
Beating out
Hopeful love
Is the air
To my lungs
Need you
To live
You face
A portrait
Of everlasting beauty
Framed before
My adoring eyes
Your lips
Their fullness
Inviting
Boundless desire
From within me
My wandering wind
Of a soul
Caught
In the vortex
Of this storm
Whirling smoke
Of burning passion
Smouldering heart
Beating out
Hopeful love
Published 19th Feb 2020
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28th Mar 2020 7:04pm
Liked your poem ... when reading it aloud though, the following To my lungs/Need you jarred between the two lines to my ear. Hope that helps.
