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Let you in again
Lets just call me vapid
Feeling like i have no brain
I know what you do
What you did
Yet here i am letting you in again
I feel your fingers pierce my heart
As you lay cuddled in the blanket i got for you
Early valentines present
I love it
I will cherish it forever
Within a blink of an eye gone
Just like before
Ghosted
But who is to blame but me
I know what you did
Yet i let you in
All over again.
Feeling like i have no brain
I know what you do
What you did
Yet here i am letting you in again
I feel your fingers pierce my heart
As you lay cuddled in the blanket i got for you
Early valentines present
I love it
I will cherish it forever
Within a blink of an eye gone
Just like before
Ghosted
But who is to blame but me
I know what you did
Yet i let you in
All over again.
Published 7th Feb 2020
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7th Feb 2020 5:43pm
thanks for introducing me to a new word "vapid"
hard to understand things that are so complex. appearing simple on the outside yet not in the detail.
hard to understand things that are so complex. appearing simple on the outside yet not in the detail.
7th Feb 2020 6:04pm
Im trying to get better with the detail sorry about that hope it was enjoyed if there is anything you think will make it better etc i can add or put that in as well
7th Feb 2020 6:24pm
oh no... the poem is great.
i was saying it is hard to understand such a complex topic.
why people do what they do and why you and your heart let things happen over again. nothing wrong with your detail.
i was saying it is hard to understand such a complex topic.
why people do what they do and why you and your heart let things happen over again. nothing wrong with your detail.
7th Feb 2020 6:30pm
Oh okay yeah i dont know i guess when they saY what you have wanted to hear all along it makes you feel like things will be different
7th Feb 2020 6:31pm
8th Feb 2020 00:21am
