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With/Without Rhyme
Don't write to be a writer
Don't write for structure
Write to feel
The moment in time
All what is needed
Is to witness
Witness
Gestures of kindness
Wonder of nature
Struggle for existance
Perception of senses
Beauty of life
Writing is almost
Close to breathing
Paying hommage
To the soul
And Plz. don't ask again
Why do I breathe?
Don't write for structure
Write to feel
The moment in time
All what is needed
Is to witness
Witness
Gestures of kindness
Wonder of nature
Struggle for existance
Perception of senses
Beauty of life
Writing is almost
Close to breathing
Paying hommage
To the soul
And Plz. don't ask again
Why do I breathe?
Published 1st Feb 2020
Author's Note
Why so many something need to be written?
Background concept image from https://kwork.com/poemsandstories/1260637/i-will-write-shayari-for-you
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2nd Feb 2020 00:22am
1st Feb 2020 11:38pm
Very much enjoyed this!! Fantastic message which resonates so deeply with me
Excellent work 👏✌️
Excellent work 👏✌️
2nd Feb 2020 00:25am
Thank you very much. I believe to follow a fixed structure in writing is to be mechanical, the soul is structureless, It is felt everywhere, in any form of writing, even in formless verse.
With best regards
Mahesh
With best regards
Mahesh
3rd Feb 2020 4:14pm
2nd Feb 2020 8:50pm
I come across writing, consistent from certain people, that is quite artificial, impersonal and disingenuous, trying to sound like something, rather than expressing the truth of self, and it is challenging for me to be nonjudgmental, but the first step is to be non reactive, and I have achieved ease with that.
Your message here holds such truth for me and my own perspective on the purpose of art.
Your message here holds such truth for me and my own perspective on the purpose of art.
3rd Feb 2020 4:16pm
