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I'm In Love
There are a hundred songs I could sing to describe you
But I don't have a voice
There are a few pictures I could draw to show the world who you truly are
but my pencils break by choice
When I close my eyes I see a wall
Of soilders
wearing cast iron plates
When I open up to you,
how quickly you slam the gate
You explain in a way that justifies your actions
and makes me understand
What's it's like to be so complicated
and Yet still be a man
And I'm in love!
You have the carisma of monkey's
An a Lions roar in need of control
And a nack for touchless bruises
Along with an amazing hold
Oh' if can sing!
It would be about
My desire for a ring
Even tho I know he's
Not sure of anything
yet he wants...EVERYTHING!
And I'm....I'm just in Love!
But I don't have a voice
There are a few pictures I could draw to show the world who you truly are
but my pencils break by choice
When I close my eyes I see a wall
Of soilders
wearing cast iron plates
When I open up to you,
how quickly you slam the gate
You explain in a way that justifies your actions
and makes me understand
What's it's like to be so complicated
and Yet still be a man
And I'm in love!
You have the carisma of monkey's
An a Lions roar in need of control
And a nack for touchless bruises
Along with an amazing hold
Oh' if can sing!
It would be about
My desire for a ring
Even tho I know he's
Not sure of anything
yet he wants...EVERYTHING!
And I'm....I'm just in Love!
Published 30th Jan 2020
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15th Feb 2020 10:36am
I really like this poem.
It's telling me that who we fall in love with isn't our choice, but how we ACT on it is our choice.
"There are a hundred songs I could sing to describe you
But I don't have a voice
There are a few pictures I could draw to show the world who you truly are
but my pencils break by choice"
In the lines above, I think it's saying 'I didn't have a choice, my heart already decided it was yours'/
It's telling me that who we fall in love with isn't our choice, but how we ACT on it is our choice.
"There are a hundred songs I could sing to describe you
But I don't have a voice
There are a few pictures I could draw to show the world who you truly are
but my pencils break by choice"
In the lines above, I think it's saying 'I didn't have a choice, my heart already decided it was yours'/
You read it right a heart like mine doesn't accept defeat when love is applied and Im in love :)
15th Feb 2020 1:54pm
