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Heart of Gold
A forbidden kind of magic lies,
Hidden behind her tragic eyes.
Great lids of sorrow, heavy, hide
The treasure buried deep inside.
A heart of gold within her chest,
'Neath silken sheets, upon her breast,
And I possess the perfect key—
She opens her precious heart to me!
Hidden behind her tragic eyes.
Great lids of sorrow, heavy, hide
The treasure buried deep inside.
A heart of gold within her chest,
'Neath silken sheets, upon her breast,
And I possess the perfect key—
She opens her precious heart to me!
Author's Note
I'm going to leave this one up to the reader's interpretation :)
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Heart of Gold
25th Jan 2020 8:07am
This is a lovely poem NB
I freaking loved this read
Thank you for sharing
I freaking loved this read
Thank you for sharing
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Re: Re. Heart of Gold
25th Jan 2020 8:15am
You are too kind, Wh1skey! Thanks so much for that uplifting comment! I'm glad that you loved it so much... Means a lot to me :)
Thanks for stopping by again!
Thanks for stopping by again!
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26th Jan 2020 3:49am
Just thought of this, but the title of this wonderful poem, is the title to a beautiful song that happens to be among my favorites
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WwaIWAH9OtQ
In case you want to enjoy of course :)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WwaIWAH9OtQ
In case you want to enjoy of course :)
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Re. Heart of Gold
25th Jan 2020 8:10am
I like it. It has a very delicate feel to it. Really well said. Great flow and rhythm.
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Re: Re. Heart of Gold
25th Jan 2020 8:22am
Thanks Cosiest! So glad to have you in the audience cheering me on! Glad you liked it😊
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25th Jan 2020 11:10am
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25th Jan 2020 3:09pm
Thank you, my friend! I'm glad that you thought so 😊
Much respect to you as well!
Much respect to you as well!
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25th Jan 2020 4:55pm
Re. Heart of Gold
25th Jan 2020 1:29pm
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Love is tender... I write from experience :)
Thanks so much, buddha...I appreciate you stopping by!
Thanks so much, buddha...I appreciate you stopping by!
Re. Heart of Gold
25th Jan 2020 1:55pm
Dear NB,
I like it. It's full of beautiful, romantic words, and it's not abstract.
I like it. It's full of beautiful, romantic words, and it's not abstract.
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Re: Re. Heart of Gold
25th Jan 2020 3:38pm
Hey Joseph,
I appreciate you stopping by read and comment! Thanks so much for the kind words! I try... 😁
I appreciate you stopping by read and comment! Thanks so much for the kind words! I try... 😁
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Re: Re. Heart of Gold
26th Jan 2020 5:27am
Thank you, Kaylor! I truly appreciate you stopping by again to read my poems! Your support is most appreciated! 😊
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25th Jan 2020 5:16pm
Re: Re. Heart of Gold
26th Jan 2020 6:57pm
Hey Tim! I appreciate your kind words! I'm happy that you liked my poem 😊 Thank you for stopping by again!
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25th Jan 2020 5:45pm
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26th Jan 2020 9:31pm
It's so good to see you hear Hunter. I'm honored that you enjoyed the poem, and I truly appreciate you stopping in to let me know that! Thanks for your support 😊
Re. Heart of Gold
25th Jan 2020 10:57pm
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26th Jan 2020 10:09pm
Hi Allis,
Thank you for your readership. Your kind words are deeply appreciated! It's good to see you here again ❤️
Thank you for your readership. Your kind words are deeply appreciated! It's good to see you here again ❤️
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26th Jan 2020 11:22pm
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25th Jan 2020 11:15pm
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28th Jan 2020 00:45am
XiaoLong,
I am super happy to be able to inspire you to write a poem. I thought your spin on my words was very creative, although I was definitely NOT expecting an erotic poem dedicated to me. I see that is your expertise, though, so I should not be surprised lol. Anyway, thanks for the flattery!
This poem was not actually written to be erotica, but I realized that it could be taken that way, hence the author's note here. And although erotica is not really my "thing", I thought your poem was well written :)
Thanks for stopping by here to read this in the first place.. I'm always happy to inspire!
I am super happy to be able to inspire you to write a poem. I thought your spin on my words was very creative, although I was definitely NOT expecting an erotic poem dedicated to me. I see that is your expertise, though, so I should not be surprised lol. Anyway, thanks for the flattery!
This poem was not actually written to be erotica, but I realized that it could be taken that way, hence the author's note here. And although erotica is not really my "thing", I thought your poem was well written :)
Thanks for stopping by here to read this in the first place.. I'm always happy to inspire!
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13th Feb 2020 8:15am
Erotica is really not my thing but it’s has a unique opportunity level for creativity and complexity that I find challenging. And when I write it’s somehow seems to flow effortlessly. It’s the blend of abstract and explicit that I find fascinating. It’s my way of celebrating love and passion. :-p
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Re. Heart of Gold
26th Jan 2020 1:13am
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28th Jan 2020 00:47am
Glad you liked it, mysterious ❤️
Thanks so much for your continued support! You're awesome! 🙂
Thanks so much for your continued support! You're awesome! 🙂
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Anonymous
26th Jan 2020 3:57am
You certainly have the perfect key with this one.
Sweet and sensual, I really like it, NB. ❤
Sweet and sensual, I really like it, NB. ❤
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Re: Re. Heart of Gold
28th Jan 2020 1:08am
Awww, thanks so much, PencilScribbles :)
I really appreciate your love and kindness!
I really appreciate your love and kindness!
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26th Jan 2020 4:44am
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28th Jan 2020 1:21am
Get Tenderloin! I truly appreciate this those kind words... I put a lot of time and thought into some of these poems. This is one of them. It may be short, but I spent a lot of time 'perfecting it', so I'm glad that you can see that 🙂
Thank you so much for stopping by again! I am so glad that you liked the poem ❤️
Thank you so much for stopping by again! I am so glad that you liked the poem ❤️
Re: Re. Heart of Gold
28th Jan 2020 3:54am
Brevity can have impact. It was crafted with delicate care and you should be proud of it.
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Re. Heart of Gold
26th Jan 2020 7:50am
I just found this site today. This is one of the first poems i've read here. It inspired me to submit my own. A beautiful read. Felt very connected with this. Thank you.
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Re: Re. Heart of Gold
28th Jan 2020 3:44am
Hey JaiVagabond. I went to your page and checked out your poetry; I am impressed! You're a really great writer :)
I'm so glad to have given you the confidence to post your own poems... I am very happy to hear that! Thank you very much for your wonderful compliment, and I'm glad that you can relate.
It seems you are finding a good home here at DUP. I'm hoping you like it... This community is really supportive and inspiring, and there are some really talented people here. It's good to have you around!
If you get a chance... Check out my poem "Walking in the Wilderness". I think that you would like it :)
I'm so glad to have given you the confidence to post your own poems... I am very happy to hear that! Thank you very much for your wonderful compliment, and I'm glad that you can relate.
It seems you are finding a good home here at DUP. I'm hoping you like it... This community is really supportive and inspiring, and there are some really talented people here. It's good to have you around!
If you get a chance... Check out my poem "Walking in the Wilderness". I think that you would like it :)
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Re: Re. Heart of Gold
28th Jan 2020 3:58am
Thank you for stopping by to share your beautiful kindness ❤️
Love is tender, so I'm glad that I relayed the feeling of love well. I appreciate you so much!
Love is tender, so I'm glad that I relayed the feeling of love well. I appreciate you so much!
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26th Jan 2020 1:50pm
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28th Jan 2020 4:38am
Haha, my precious!! You'll have to convince a woman to let you have the key to hers :)
I'm so glad you liked it, Tim. You write some wonderful poetry yourself!
I'm so glad you liked it, Tim. You write some wonderful poetry yourself!
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26th Jan 2020 2:38pm
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28th Jan 2020 4:55am
It's so good to hear from you on this one, LilDragonFluly! I appreciate you stopping by again to read my poetry :)
I'm really glad that you liked the poem ❤️
I'm really glad that you liked the poem ❤️
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Re: Re. Heart of Gold
28th Jan 2020 5:10am
Thanks so much for your great compliment, sky! I'm so glad that you noticed the time I took with this one, and all that went into it. I really appreciate you stopping by to read and comment ❤️
Re. Heart of Gold
27th Jan 2020 11:13pm
Trust to open ones heart is beautiful...
Tho short and sweet it holds within itself the beauty of how strong one can be despite their past
I love it, thankyou for sharing 😊
Tho short and sweet it holds within itself the beauty of how strong one can be despite their past
I love it, thankyou for sharing 😊
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Re: Re. Heart of Gold
29th Jan 2020 00:06am
Thank you, Countygal!
Your RL and your kind words are much appreciated... Trust and honesty are truly beautiful things. This was straight from the heart, so I'm glad that you could feel the emotion that I put into it when you read it❤️
Thank you for stopping by again!
Best wishes,
-NewB
Your RL and your kind words are much appreciated... Trust and honesty are truly beautiful things. This was straight from the heart, so I'm glad that you could feel the emotion that I put into it when you read it❤️
Thank you for stopping by again!
Best wishes,
-NewB
Re. Heart of Gold
28th Jan 2020 3:47am
Treat your woman with respect and she might later on show you her naughty and freaky side.
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Re: Re. Heart of Gold
29th Jan 2020 00:09am
That is very true, Francisco! You should always treat her with respect. Although I didn't actually intend for it to be erotic, I realized it could be taken that way, so I left my little author's note.
I'm so glad that you liked my poem enough to RL. I truly appreciate you stopping by! Thank you for your support ❤️
I'm so glad that you liked my poem enough to RL. I truly appreciate you stopping by! Thank you for your support ❤️
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29th Jan 2020 6:00am
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30th Jan 2020 10:26pm
Thanks for that amazing compliment, Stillalive! I appreciate your kindness and support! You're sweet ❤️