Lesser Hues

Like the way the length of the highlit lines mirror the contours of the sensuous  female silhouette like an all over lacy gown.

I need to work here -
the form is not quite correct:
correction's important

Agree with Solomon.  The supporting image works nicely with the text.   I will add that the usage of fucktard was jarring, but in a way that actually gave greater depth to the train of thought in that sequence.

it should maybe be "takes" not "breaks" a fucktard - the jarring was deliberate as you will realise sir.  Smiles

"Breaks" seems to work.  

it could be wakes - grins

I love your form..fun read as always...

It's sweet of you to say
That you so enjoyed the play
Of my funny little verses
And my life's sweet reverses

Milady this is visual art embodied in poetry. And I must say you do it like none other. Truly a work of art to fill the mind with all sorts of naughty dreams. And emotionally charged visions at that.

XoXoXo
John

emotionally charged naughtiness may be very naughty indeed