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Black As Noir♠️
( a Concrete spill & scrub )
A
black
tar crow,
the night in
silhouette, he
flies away from
his inheritance but
is caged by syllables
and the past, black as
noir of death before
dawn, with sirens’
calling that also
turn to night,
but it’s then
as crow’s
perch’d
above
over
city
street,
fleeting
shadows
a city flash
neon strobe
that separates,
to merge into the
bars and private
clubs, the high
and the low
life are as
one tide
alone
till
an
onyx
wave,
tox-ic,
& mute,
a disdain,
rogue dog
crews of the
hour drag the
hookers back to
the alleys, and the
crow on his laptop to
peck about the sex,
of lovers & lies &
cold war spies,
the treachery
& butchery,
to look up
bomber
black-
outs
of
dime
store’
novels
(read in
hard rain)
by Mickey
S p i l l a n e
•♣️•
A
black
tar crow,
the night in
silhouette, he
flies away from
his inheritance but
is caged by syllables
and the past, black as
noir of death before
dawn, with sirens’
calling that also
turn to night,
but it’s then
as crow’s
perch’d
above
over
city
street,
fleeting
shadows
a city flash
neon strobe
that separates,
to merge into the
bars and private
clubs, the high
and the low
life are as
one tide
alone
till
an
onyx
wave,
tox-ic,
& mute,
a disdain,
rogue dog
crews of the
hour drag the
hookers back to
the alleys, and the
crow on his laptop to
peck about the sex,
of lovers & lies &
cold war spies,
the treachery
& butchery,
to look up
bomber
black-
outs
of
dime
store’
novels
(read in
hard rain)
by Mickey
S p i l l a n e
•♣️•
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 23rd Jan 2020
Author's Note
My Secret Santa during the holidays last month for crowfly which I was able to read to Thomas this evening PST, a lovely visit, and happy to pass on that he’s doing okay. :D
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23rd Jan 2020 5:25am
Aaaw Thank you, Mama Bear for that, and the RL honor.
Tiger xxx’s
( opps, ‘scuse my snaggletooth...)🤭
🐾
Tiger xxx’s
( opps, ‘scuse my snaggletooth...)🤭
🐾
Re. Black As Noir
23rd Jan 2020 11:26am
Re: Re. Black As Noir
23rd Jan 2020 11:38am
Thank you dear Poet Stoney, I’m pleased you enjoyed this unusual effort of mine. Even to paying it honor upon your List, which humbles this poetess as it should.🙏🏻
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23rd Jan 2020 12:24pm
your very welcome poetess for sometimes its alright to step out of the norm of things and just shake things up...respect
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Re. Black As Noir
23rd Jan 2020 3:06pm
I really love the poem... What a wonderful send up to the Age of Noir, a genre that seems to be slipping away.
Great work, and as a concrete.
tommy
Great work, and as a concrete.
tommy
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I’m so glad you were able to catch up on some of my lastest works this morning because we both got to feel a bit uplifted during the grateful time together. And we both share a passion for Noir that we keep alive in our hearts.
🐯💌😽
🐯💌😽
Re. Black As Noir
23rd Jan 2020 3:07pm
I really love the poem... What a wonderful send up to the Age of Noir, a genre that seems to be slipping away.
Great work, and as a concrete.
tommy
Great work, and as a concrete.
tommy
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Re. Black As Noir
23rd Jan 2020 3:15pm
Re: Re. Black As Noir
25th Jan 2020 00:16am
Thank you, darling Kitty.🙏🏻
Your sweet words, in appreciation to something that for me was a fun challenge to try and learn from, were almost soothing during what was a terribly hectic day.
sandpaper licks,
ever
Tiger Jade👅
Your sweet words, in appreciation to something that for me was a fun challenge to try and learn from, were almost soothing during what was a terribly hectic day.
sandpaper licks,
ever
Tiger Jade👅
Re. Black As Noir
23rd Jan 2020 3:31pm
Very nice, Jade! You're a fantastic writer... The form of the poem is unique and creative as well! Bravo :)
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25th Jan 2020 00:30am
Ohhh thank you most kindly, dear NB my friend... you are too good to me with your appreciation...
And your recommend!💌
Jade🐾
And your recommend!💌
Jade🐾
Re. Black As Noir
23rd Jan 2020 6:36pm
Jade - I'm fascinated by this concept, and mesmerized as I read it through at its accelerated pace from the tight, winding structure! Wonderfully crafted.
Kathy
Kathy
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Re. Black As Noir
23rd Jan 2020 8:34pm
This format is bewitching which ties into the subject matter beautifully.
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*sqwueeee...*
Poppyyy!
I thank you for sharing this.🙏🏻
And for the RL!🙀
Happy tiger 🐾
Poppyyy!
I thank you for sharing this.🙏🏻
And for the RL!🙀
Happy tiger 🐾
Re. Black As Noir
Anonymous
24th Jan 2020 11:32am
she's Gemini and I'm feces
she's healthy and I'm deceased
ha ha, .. love your gift Jade, .. love the form Yeah, .. think I saw you over on deviantart
she's healthy and I'm deceased
ha ha, .. love your gift Jade, .. love the form Yeah, .. think I saw you over on deviantart
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Re: Re. Black As Noir
24th Jan 2020 12:54pm
You very well might have, my page is still open there, just not active as I am here. And thanks so much for visiting for a read, I’m glad to learn of your enjoyment, Dire.
p.s. did you know in prehistoric times here where we have the La Brea tar pits (which I used to visit /all/ the time), they’ve discovered the bones of thousands of animals including one called the “dire wolf”, lots of them!
p.s. did you know in prehistoric times here where we have the La Brea tar pits (which I used to visit /all/ the time), they’ve discovered the bones of thousands of animals including one called the “dire wolf”, lots of them!
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Anonymous
24th Jan 2020 11:56pm
ha, ha, my gamer names
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25th Jan 2020 00:19am
Re. Black As Noir
26th Jan 2020 6:29am
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26th Jan 2020 10:48am
Gosh Wally, thanks so much, and I live them too. I don’t write a concreat often, that way it’s extra special when I do.😌
RL gratitude 🤟🐯
RL gratitude 🤟🐯