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Heartbroken
Reality
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Reality
Written by
Mayumi
Published
22nd Jan 2020
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#despair
#emptiness
#grief
#heartbroken
#regret
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Re. Reality
Ahavati
(Tams)
22nd Jan 2020 3:50pm
I really felt the emptiness and grief in this one Mayumi. You chose the perfect graphic too - slowly melting.
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Re: Re. Reality
Mayumi
22nd Jan 2020 3:52pm
Thanks so much for reading and appreciating. Poetry j guess is such an awesome flatform for words that a person couldnt utter . Yeah?
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Re: Re. Reality
Ahavati
(Tams)
22nd Jan 2020 3:53pm
Absolutely.
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Re. Reality
grey
23rd Jan 2020 00:19am
The image of the sculpture adds a depth to the poem and the description is lovely and very feeling
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Re: Re. Reality
Mayumi
23rd Jan 2020 1:46am
I believe so too. . Aesthetic aspect of an art is further appreciated when mixed with another form as it gives further depth and beauty. Thanks so much for appreciating! @grey
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23rd Jan 2020 12:39pm
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Re: Re. Reality
Mayumi
23rd Jan 2020 2:07pm
Thanks for appreciating. Good night
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