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Cloud Bound
cornflower edges fill my vision,
hint of blue water in the interim;
I’m cloud bound to the hoping
in a cloudless sky
sunshine hiding it’s face from me
here, but not really here;
chased away by icy winds,
taking warmth with it
hint of blue water in the interim;
I’m cloud bound to the hoping
in a cloudless sky
sunshine hiding it’s face from me
here, but not really here;
chased away by icy winds,
taking warmth with it
Published 19th Jan 2020
Author's Note
For the Your Sky competition
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19th Jan 2020 10:01pm
A great entry, Luna. I could feel the chill in this. You had me at cornflower!
Best of luck in the comp.
Best of luck in the comp.
19th Jan 2020 11:48pm
21st Jan 2020 3:11am
There is a zen quality to the magnification of detail and a contrasting kind of melancholy painted into the environment, it's beautifully blended, like colors on a canvas, bleeding into one another. Such a sweet, sacrosanct oasis amidst the various emotional tangents and agendas I encounter in my reading. Namaste.
21st Jan 2020 1:31pm
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21st Jan 2020 7:15pm
21st Feb 2020 9:08pm
I love these type of pieces because one can gauge many scenarios within its breath of verse :)
22nd Feb 2020 1:20am
