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Love's Artifice
I miss kisses long and voracious
Supple arms thrown ‘roun my neck
Tongue and lips their taste delicious
Heady “you” scent of your breath
When your erect, rose-colored nipples I’d suck
I thrilled at the sound of your gasp
Imagining no earth dwelling man with such luck
Divinely formed globes in my grasp
With stiffened tongue I would pleasure
Your sometimes bejeweled navel
Probing for deep buried treasure
Not for the moan but the giggle
Pure happiness I found caressing your thighs
Spread wide exposing your “you” fragranced flower
Sweet music the sound of your ecstatic cries
When I with kisses your pink petals showered
With urgent, eager supplication
You would beg me enter your private haven
Manhood steeled by your invitation
I’d pass through the gates to the bliss I was craving
Never had I felt so desired
Every aspect of life was enhanced
Filled with vigor, rarely tired
My heart leapt, my voice sang, my feet danced
Her ardor for me is all but
extinguished
Love's fickle flames now consume one much younger
Her want for my company,
undiminished
My heart, used to heat, in cold cannot linger.
Our torrid tryst confined to Snap-chatting
not in vivo sex, merely cyber
my brain does still conjure real feeling
felt deep in my soul’s every fiber
Dear reader be not prone to speculation fantastical
For you see, my simple verse is a pure hypothetical
Supple arms thrown ‘roun my neck
Tongue and lips their taste delicious
Heady “you” scent of your breath
When your erect, rose-colored nipples I’d suck
I thrilled at the sound of your gasp
Imagining no earth dwelling man with such luck
Divinely formed globes in my grasp
With stiffened tongue I would pleasure
Your sometimes bejeweled navel
Probing for deep buried treasure
Not for the moan but the giggle
Pure happiness I found caressing your thighs
Spread wide exposing your “you” fragranced flower
Sweet music the sound of your ecstatic cries
When I with kisses your pink petals showered
With urgent, eager supplication
You would beg me enter your private haven
Manhood steeled by your invitation
I’d pass through the gates to the bliss I was craving
Never had I felt so desired
Every aspect of life was enhanced
Filled with vigor, rarely tired
My heart leapt, my voice sang, my feet danced
Her ardor for me is all but
extinguished
Love's fickle flames now consume one much younger
Her want for my company,
undiminished
My heart, used to heat, in cold cannot linger.
Our torrid tryst confined to Snap-chatting
not in vivo sex, merely cyber
my brain does still conjure real feeling
felt deep in my soul’s every fiber
Dear reader be not prone to speculation fantastical
For you see, my simple verse is a pure hypothetical
Published 18th Jan 2020
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18th Jan 2020 10:40pm
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18th Jan 2020 10:59pm
And I love the fecal insight you took from the piece 😋😄
.Thank you do much, Sky!
.Thank you do much, Sky!
20th Jan 2020 8:51pm
Wonderful blend of recollection and longing ... both emoting and evoking ...
20th Jan 2020 8:55pm
Thank you, Soledad! Leave it to me to write melancholy erotica. 😁 It's life, right?
21st Jan 2020 2:32am
I think this has a fascinating blend of emotions, nuanced throughout with subtlety in your eloquently rendered language. Longing, loss, a bit of cheek, desire and a somewhat philosophical reflection, an overview of time, self, and the states of desire as they organically unfold and dissipate. Might be way off of course, author intention is always an intangible, but it made me think.
22nd Jan 2020 9:46pm
" “you” fragranced "
^^^^^
hit me right between the eyes.. it's simultaneously subtle & raw, both a deeply personal association & something everyone can relate to... two words so inane on their own and in this context, they become a journey into primal memory.
i see a little ov my own affairs towards the end, minus the cyber aspect... ya know me with my predilection for uhm... gentlemen with erudite hands... the mind is willing but the flesh sometimes needs a nap instead ov a mid afternoon fuck fest.
i must agree with Daniel, it sure makes one think
^^^^^
hit me right between the eyes.. it's simultaneously subtle & raw, both a deeply personal association & something everyone can relate to... two words so inane on their own and in this context, they become a journey into primal memory.
i see a little ov my own affairs towards the end, minus the cyber aspect... ya know me with my predilection for uhm... gentlemen with erudite hands... the mind is willing but the flesh sometimes needs a nap instead ov a mid afternoon fuck fest.
i must agree with Daniel, it sure makes one think
23rd Jan 2020 4:51am
It turns me on that it made you think. I hesitated to use the "you" thing twice but I found an intimate vehicle to conveying the uniqueness of scent. I am glad you keyed on those two words...I tingled when I wrote them.
I cannot claim to have erudite hands and the choice between a nap and fuck-fest is not a hard one but rather depending on a hard one I guess.
I cannot claim to have erudite hands and the choice between a nap and fuck-fest is not a hard one but rather depending on a hard one I guess.
17th Feb 2020 6:21am
I love that "your “you” fragranced" reference as well. You totally packed a punch for the happiest scene, even using one of my favorite emotions during such a tryst, which made it more realistic...
"Not for the moan but the giggle"..
I love sex giggles! Of course it staggered into a mere fleeting fantasy, but you still relayed the emotional feel the cyber world still offers! In my experience, maybe more so because my imagination can get more worked up. Hmm🤔
. .. loved it, you sapiosexual tease.😘
"Not for the moan but the giggle"..
I love sex giggles! Of course it staggered into a mere fleeting fantasy, but you still relayed the emotional feel the cyber world still offers! In my experience, maybe more so because my imagination can get more worked up. Hmm🤔
. .. loved it, you sapiosexual tease.😘
17th Feb 2020 9:14pm
I am honored to be thought of as a sapiosexual tease....high praise from one possessed with a greater degree of that skill 😁🌷 I am happy you like the giggle part. I too love when such Joy and ease is expressed in that intimate of a situation.
And the "you fragrances" still evokes a tingle in me.😘
And the "you fragrances" still evokes a tingle in me.😘
18th Feb 2020 4:38am
Ah.... you posses the greater skill than I, silly boy. I'm definitely tickled pink about your tingles.😁 A real man or lover should strive for those giggles too, it's supposed to be fun and carefree in my humble opinion.;)
18th Feb 2020 5:11am
Pandy, I agree 100% A couple that can laugh together has a much better chance of surviving the tough times.
