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With you I'm free to open up
Laugh, ramble, jitters in my voice
To tell incriminating stories without worries
Smiling hard with wrinkles forming
Cheeks hurt still laughing
This new freedom
You bring
Me

Happiness
Your personality
Creates longing of
I want to know you
Dance, play, sing, poke, tease
Its incredibly wonderful to see you

Through my eyes you have it all
I like that you are tall
The silly things you do
Poetry of your words
Your thoughts emerge
Unto my ears
And find
Rest

I
Am silent
Waiting on the
Next note your voice
Speaks, I listen attentively surrounding
You arrest me with artistry of delicacies
Written by Bluphoria
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Author's Note
I was trying to write a poem with my stanzas having alternating 7 thru 1 words and 1 thru 7 words. Just exploring something new.
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