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Clew Bay
In the tide that pushes time
Onto shores of lost convictions
Drowning in their pissed filled pride
With the sinners and contradictions
Sink like the stone
That you casted as a penance
Go hypocrites with your politics
Dive deep for your forgiveness
Go Grab the tail of the rolling sun
Burn your hand with all its stains
Then take them to the waters
The healing waters of Clew Bay
Onto shores of lost convictions
Drowning in their pissed filled pride
With the sinners and contradictions
Sink like the stone
That you casted as a penance
Go hypocrites with your politics
Dive deep for your forgiveness
Go Grab the tail of the rolling sun
Burn your hand with all its stains
Then take them to the waters
The healing waters of Clew Bay
Published 13th Jan 2020
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13th Jan 2020 1:15pm
Hi Vferry, welcome to DUP. I like the way your poem brings the reader round to Nature as a healing force that helps us cope with the craziness of the poltical scenes in which we live. Nice Write. I've nominated your poem in the New Member of the Month comp - details of which you can find here: https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11185/
If you don't wish to be nominated, just let me know and I'll remove it it. Best regards, Josh.
If you don't wish to be nominated, just let me know and I'll remove it it. Best regards, Josh.
15th Jan 2020 5:50am
Wow! I appreciate the nice words. I am a hack compared to you folks, but I do enjoy this creative and supportive community.
Vferry...
I’m so close to being speechless. And if you knew me well, that’s a good thing.
Jade🐾
I’m so close to being speechless. And if you knew me well, that’s a good thing.
Jade🐾
