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When Our Hearts Broke
When mine broke
I looked down
where it fell
The shards reflected
I saw many faces
looking back at me
But when yours did
I thought you saw
empty skies
Save for a flock
just distant birds
I looked down
where it fell
The shards reflected
I saw many faces
looking back at me
But when yours did
I thought you saw
empty skies
Save for a flock
just distant birds
Published 9th Jan 2020
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9th Jan 2020 3:09pm
You're really putting out some great pieces. We're looking at your work with new eyes, tight work Lady
9th Jan 2020 3:42pm
Very dear EW,
I Love this poem. For me it is very expressive. That person's look returned hope to you and filled your life with coming hope.
I Love this poem. For me it is very expressive. That person's look returned hope to you and filled your life with coming hope.
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