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Love Bird's
Telling secrets to the ocean,
landing egrets by his shore
An artist palette sunrise,
as he answers to the sea
Seasoned poet scribes emotions
looking deep within her plea
" fly to me, fly to me, sweet
lady bird, you are free"
landing egrets by his shore
An artist palette sunrise,
as he answers to the sea
Seasoned poet scribes emotions
looking deep within her plea
" fly to me, fly to me, sweet
lady bird, you are free"
Author's Note
Taking flight...
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Anonymous
8th Jan 2020 10:08am
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Anonymous
8th Jan 2020 5:36pm
Always like reading you...crisp, meaningful, sweet. (Still waiting for your "walking with a smile" schedule! LOL
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10th Jan 2020 6:36pm
Thank you my dear poet! I'll let you know on the walking with a smile schedule lol. Your humour makes me smile😉
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10th Jan 2020 6:38pm
Thank you so much for the kind words NB! I am grateful for the RL my dear poet💜🙏
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10th Jan 2020 6:41pm
Thank you MS! Telling my secrets to the ocean seems to get me answers in nature I wouldn't normally hear. I appreciate you for your support as well ✌
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Anonymous
9th Jan 2020 2:53am
I spend Many mornings at the place where the shore meets the ocean.
It is where I find as much Peace and freedom as this ink provides
It is where I find as much Peace and freedom as this ink provides
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10th Jan 2020 6:44pm
Ikr? Thank you for always being a beautiful person. I can always count on you to be supportive. Please, remember I am grateful for your support💜🙏
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9th Jan 2020 5:51am
Dear L,
Beautiful visual imagery with this piece. Felt myself lifted and refreshed after that imagined walk on the beach that’s nowhere near me but your lovely write made it possible in my mind’s eye. Excellent. H🌷
Beautiful visual imagery with this piece. Felt myself lifted and refreshed after that imagined walk on the beach that’s nowhere near me but your lovely write made it possible in my mind’s eye. Excellent. H🌷
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10th Jan 2020 6:50pm
Dear H,
I am so grateful for you. You are a beautiful part of my day as I read your comments on my scribes.
Right now I am no where near the ocean either lol. I do however go to the ocean side throughout the year. This piece is what happens to me when I am there.
You are appreciated more than you probably know dear one.
Love L. 💜🙏
I am so grateful for you. You are a beautiful part of my day as I read your comments on my scribes.
Right now I am no where near the ocean either lol. I do however go to the ocean side throughout the year. This piece is what happens to me when I am there.
You are appreciated more than you probably know dear one.
Love L. 💜🙏
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