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My Willing Fate
She has the power
To move the earth beneath me
What seemed solid
Is no more
She is endless
Flowing through my veins
Her touch the infinity
To these senses
There’s a majesty
In her beauty
Laced with
An essence of imperfection
I feel transparent
In her very presence
Lost in the breath
Of a beautiful soul
Her feminine frame
A hidden ocean of desire
Slipping into her waters
Would be my willing fate
To move the earth beneath me
What seemed solid
Is no more
She is endless
Flowing through my veins
Her touch the infinity
To these senses
There’s a majesty
In her beauty
Laced with
An essence of imperfection
I feel transparent
In her very presence
Lost in the breath
Of a beautiful soul
Her feminine frame
A hidden ocean of desire
Slipping into her waters
Would be my willing fate
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Re. My Willing Fate
5th Jan 2020 6:16am
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5th Jan 2020 6:59am
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5th Jan 2020 12:21pm
Re. My Willing Fate
5th Jan 2020 3:41pm
Lovely offering, AP. Your language is becoming more succinct, thus tightening up the verse greatly. Good job.
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Re. My Willing Fate
5th Jan 2020 5:44pm
Fate? more like a ceding cell
( if i didn't know You better, i'd say You've been smitten by a venomous siren)
another sensual romantic spill -- well done, Brother
( if i didn't know You better, i'd say You've been smitten by a venomous siren)
another sensual romantic spill -- well done, Brother
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Re. My Willing Fate
6th Jan 2020 7:32am
Re. My Willing Fate
10th Jan 2020 00:01am
I feel transparent
In her very presence
Lost in the breath
Of a beautiful soul
I am in total awe...this is mental mesmerizing, a very nice poetic spill
In her very presence
Lost in the breath
Of a beautiful soul
I am in total awe...this is mental mesmerizing, a very nice poetic spill
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