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Is It That Time Again?
( a Quatern )
It’s time to make a promise for the year,
To be steadfast in resolute success.
I try to see a glass half full and clear,
Instead of good intentions in a mess.
I sit and make a list in poet’s rhyme,
It’s time to make a promise for the year.
Of something not too hard for me to climb,
Yet making sure it’s near my heart & dear.
While staring at my list I feel a tear,
Because the page is blank without a clue.
It’s time to make a promise for the year,
But I can’t think of one thing I can do.
Am I a coward, why can’t I commit?
Do I have feet of clay, what do I fear?
Each year I go through this and have a fit,
It’s time to make a promise for the year.
It’s time to make a promise for the year,
To be steadfast in resolute success.
I try to see a glass half full and clear,
Instead of good intentions in a mess.
I sit and make a list in poet’s rhyme,
It’s time to make a promise for the year.
Of something not too hard for me to climb,
Yet making sure it’s near my heart & dear.
While staring at my list I feel a tear,
Because the page is blank without a clue.
It’s time to make a promise for the year,
But I can’t think of one thing I can do.
Am I a coward, why can’t I commit?
Do I have feet of clay, what do I fear?
Each year I go through this and have a fit,
It’s time to make a promise for the year.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 3rd Jan 2020
Author's Note
For Missy’s Poetcast competition “New Years Funnies”.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Is It That Time Again?
3rd Jan 2020 6:53pm
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3rd Jan 2020 7:02pm
LOL! Oh you lil’ dickens, you got me there!❤️
Thanks so much for visiting and feeling the connection - and that recommend, whoa Mama!
sandpaper tiger licks 👅
Jadey🐾
Thanks so much for visiting and feeling the connection - and that recommend, whoa Mama!
sandpaper tiger licks 👅
Jadey🐾
Re. Is It That Time Again?
Anonymous
3rd Jan 2020 7:24pm
Universal thoughts conveyed with the Jade skills blending the provocative, passionate and elements of a wink. Just the kind of excellent piece we'f expect from you, Jade! Thank you for sharing!
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Dear Poet,
Gracious thanks... So eloquently put when it comes to my rollicking write-up! I enjoyed doing this one. I never know what to expect of myself.😁
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Gracious thanks... So eloquently put when it comes to my rollicking write-up! I enjoyed doing this one. I never know what to expect of myself.😁
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Re. Is It That Time Again?
3rd Jan 2020 8:21pm
Nothing like a new year to make the old legs quiver a bit. Good fun write Jade.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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3rd Jan 2020 8:35pm
*giggle-snorts*
I’ll go along with that, sweet Kitty sis! It was lotsa fun for sure.
Jade🐾😺
I’ll go along with that, sweet Kitty sis! It was lotsa fun for sure.
Jade🐾😺
Re. Is It That Time Again?
3rd Jan 2020 10:15pm
I love the Quatern style, I also love the content. I resolved a while ago to make a goal and try to make it fun, why not? This year for 2020, 10 new charities I have never given to before and 10 new restaurants I have never been to before. 10 + 10= 20(20) haha.
"Of something not too hard for me to climb,"
"Of something not too hard for me to climb,"
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6th Jan 2020 3:55am
Hey now... those are pretty good choices there, TIG... wishing you success!
And thank you for visiting (appreciated more than you know), to share your thoughts with me.
Jade🐾
And thank you for visiting (appreciated more than you know), to share your thoughts with me.
Jade🐾
Re. Is It That Time Again?
4th Jan 2020 12:42pm
nicely composed dear poetess yeah we including thyself have a hard time with this each new year i just try to achieve those things that i need to change for change sometimes is a hard thing to face but if we including thyself dont take the necessary steps to take that leap of faith we will never know how much true potential we have and what we can achieve...respect poetess
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6th Jan 2020 3:23am
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6th Jan 2020 11:57am
Re. Is It That Time Again?
6th Jan 2020 4:59am
Dear JP,
Oh the pressure! Does it count if my New Year’s promise(s) are to eat more chocolate, drink more wine and buy more shoes? Because those are the only promises I seem to be able to keep consistently. Best of luck in the comp ;-). H🌷
Oh the pressure! Does it count if my New Year’s promise(s) are to eat more chocolate, drink more wine and buy more shoes? Because those are the only promises I seem to be able to keep consistently. Best of luck in the comp ;-). H🌷
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8th Jan 2020 10:51am
LOL oh my, if I could’ve made a promise about chocolate... now THAT’s a resolution I would stick to like glue!
p.s. I entered the comp with 30 seconds to spare lol so I just made it! But I think the winner was decided on an hour or so later going to someone else, but hey... I had fun writing my little ditty, and looks like it put a smile on other faces!🙂
tiger hugs, sister
ever
Jade
p.s. I entered the comp with 30 seconds to spare lol so I just made it! But I think the winner was decided on an hour or so later going to someone else, but hey... I had fun writing my little ditty, and looks like it put a smile on other faces!🙂
tiger hugs, sister
ever
Jade
Re. Is It That Time Again?
7th Jan 2020 9:02pm
Promise indeed, sometimes we're scared of that commitment because it's holds us accountable, but halfway through I knew exactly what I needed to do. Call them resolutions, promises or goals, writing them down is the first step to a newer us.
Great write.
Great write.
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8th Jan 2020 11:01am
LOL, I was having fun with the whole tradition and how most people can’t seem to take it serious... but now you, Wally, you took the comp, so it’s I who congratulates you!😃
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9th Jan 2020 1:22am
Omgosh, I thought I’d seen a new tiger in town - a beautiful electric tiger - and before I started this reply, I visited your page, and come to find out it’s you, my friend.
It’s good to see you, and I thank you for your thoughtful comment, and the honor being the first on your Reading List with this piece.
You are on my Follows now.
ever
Jade 🐾
It’s good to see you, and I thank you for your thoughtful comment, and the honor being the first on your Reading List with this piece.
You are on my Follows now.
ever
Jade 🐾