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ICE CREAM
Creamy
Milky
Sticky
Swirling my tongue
Around the top of your ice cream
Into the center of its creamy peak
Down to the base of your cone
Dripping down my fingers
Creamy
Milky
Sticky
Only to continue
Until there is nothing left
But your cone
Only to gently bite the base of your cone
Until the size of your cone is no more
Slowly disappearing back into
Its natural form
Milky
Sticky
Swirling my tongue
Around the top of your ice cream
Into the center of its creamy peak
Down to the base of your cone
Dripping down my fingers
Creamy
Milky
Sticky
Only to continue
Until there is nothing left
But your cone
Only to gently bite the base of your cone
Until the size of your cone is no more
Slowly disappearing back into
Its natural form
Published 3rd Jan 2020
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3rd Jan 2020 9:54pm
I scream, you scream, we all scream when you cream....wonderful metaphor....fun to read....
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12th Jan 2020 5:19am
Alicia, this is what erotica is all about. You took the ice cream cone metaphor and made magic. Love what you've done with words here.
John
John
13th Jan 2020 3:30am
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