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"value" system
energy, currency, classes;
one is microscopically bound;
masked by the masses;
roles control what is captured;
this human experience manufactured;
cries of pain through laughter;
illusional gain is mastered;
through books with unlimited chapters
Published 31st Dec 2019
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1st Jan 2020 00:43am
Awesome food for thought.😎
Is it a particle or a wave? Things of perspective. Perspective weilds power. Values, the nexus between fantasy and reality.... things with limits set by God Himself. Happy New year.
Is it a particle or a wave? Things of perspective. Perspective weilds power. Values, the nexus between fantasy and reality.... things with limits set by God Himself. Happy New year.
1st Jan 2020 1:27am
This is beautifully rendered. I love how you connect everything with semis- as though nothing is separated, but each verse is its own chapter in the poem. Well done.
thnx for your time reading, commenting, and RL add ediblewords; that means a lot. my motivation behind writing this is money and how it's as dangerous as resourceful....what if the world came crashing down tomorrow; everything that we thought we knew or had control over changes.... money does alter more or less the way people behave towards each other..money gives a person a false sense of power, freedom, etc. I'm certain that without currency; that the world would be an intense place to live in....trust, love, respect would be almost impossible in a world without a currency system....it's tough enough as it is with a "system" in place. happy new year to you also
