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climbing into the tall grasses
she hides herself
breathing in the cold earth scents
listening to the rustling wind
she runs her finger
along the edge
cutting herself open
leaving droplets of red
liquid fire on a green pasture
she hides herself
breathing in the cold earth scents
listening to the rustling wind
she runs her finger
along the edge
cutting herself open
leaving droplets of red
liquid fire on a green pasture
Published 30th Dec 2019
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30th Dec 2019 4:17pm
31st Dec 2019 9:04pm
31st Dec 2019 10:26pm
The minimalist quality of the write brings the details into sharp relief. A single image, pregnant with sensate dimensions, vivid before the mind's eye. Terrific work. I hope the new year brings you bounteous blessings Jeje. 💖
1st Jan 2020 4:09am
Thank you so much Daniel for your thoughtful comments .. greatly appreciated
Wishing you many blessings in the New Year ♡
Wishing you many blessings in the New Year ♡
