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Mole 16.
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In time for seeing off 2019, and dedicated to my Mole posse, with my love & respect from the underground Mole Queen. <3
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Re. Mole 16.
29th Dec 2019 1:38am
Hmmm. I need to think on this one a bit ( my age is showing), but I'll figure it out.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. Mole 16.
30th Dec 2019 7:40pm
( a slightly late reply due to slowly recovering from the illness of the month...)
With love & reassuring hugs to my dear Kitty sister! I know the Moles have their tricks that may seem confusing. But there’s no right or wrong when digging for their treasure, and most times, there’s more than one way to glean their message!🎁
🐾👸🏻💌
With love & reassuring hugs to my dear Kitty sister! I know the Moles have their tricks that may seem confusing. But there’s no right or wrong when digging for their treasure, and most times, there’s more than one way to glean their message!🎁
🐾👸🏻💌
Re. Mole 16.
29th Dec 2019 3:52am
Dear JP,
I was just wondering if we’d get one more Mole before the year ended and my wish came true.
While I had fun piecing it together, I got two versions I like best in my arrangements, I dis feel a bit of the loneliness behind it. I’m sorry for that. Beautifully done as usual and thank you for creating one more before the year closes out. I look forward to what the Mole brings in 2020! Many blessings in the coming new year!
H🌷
I was just wondering if we’d get one more Mole before the year ended and my wish came true.
While I had fun piecing it together, I got two versions I like best in my arrangements, I dis feel a bit of the loneliness behind it. I’m sorry for that. Beautifully done as usual and thank you for creating one more before the year closes out. I look forward to what the Mole brings in 2020! Many blessings in the coming new year!
H🌷
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Re: Re. Mole 16.
( a slightly late reply due to slowly recovering from the illness of the month...)
And warmest wishes for the New Year’s blessings to you as well, darling Honoria!
I love the way you’ve described how much you enjoy decifering each Mole while looking for and anticipating the next... because you know how often a Mole has more than one way to read its message - which is never deliberately planned - it just happens, it’s magic, the reader/seeker makes it happen!
ever
Jadey, Mole Queen 👑
🐾🎁💌
And warmest wishes for the New Year’s blessings to you as well, darling Honoria!
I love the way you’ve described how much you enjoy decifering each Mole while looking for and anticipating the next... because you know how often a Mole has more than one way to read its message - which is never deliberately planned - it just happens, it’s magic, the reader/seeker makes it happen!
ever
Jadey, Mole Queen 👑
🐾🎁💌
Re. Mole 16.
29th Dec 2019 1:12pm
loved the flow upon words like a cross word puzzle to bedazzle the mind stepping into the loneliness of the morning after nicely done poetess...repect
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Re: Re. Mole 16.
( a slightly late reply due to slowly recovering from the illness of the month...)
Thank you so much, dear Stoney! As a member of the posse, you have become a quick study for divining a Mole message.
With my best to you for the New Year...
ever
The Mole Queen
🐾🎁👸🏻
Thank you so much, dear Stoney! As a member of the posse, you have become a quick study for divining a Mole message.
With my best to you for the New Year...
ever
The Mole Queen
🐾🎁👸🏻
Re: Re. Mole 16.
31st Dec 2019 11:19am
thank you dear poetess for sharing your thoughts wishing you a blessful recovery and beautiful and blessful new years day...respect
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Re. Mole 16.
30th Dec 2019 10:39am
Very interesting and creative... Haven't seen a poem quite like this one before. I think it's really cool :)
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Re: Re. Mole 16.
Why thank you, my lovely friend.
That means you have some catching up to do - 15 more Moles await your discerning eyes as the #’s stand at the moment. ;)
Mole 1 was the prototype; just me tinkering. After that, the Mole came alive!
And most of them: the reader can discover more than one way to read them.
All my best
ever
Jadey, Mole Queen👸🏻
That means you have some catching up to do - 15 more Moles await your discerning eyes as the #’s stand at the moment. ;)
Mole 1 was the prototype; just me tinkering. After that, the Mole came alive!
And most of them: the reader can discover more than one way to read them.
All my best
ever
Jadey, Mole Queen👸🏻
Re. Mole 16.
31st Dec 2019 2:26am
The flow and suspense of the write lends well to the non linear nature of these mole poems, the whole giving off a rather ethereal, unmoored quality. Quite enjoyable to contemplate Jadey.
Jade, may the new year and new decade bring you health, happiness and prosperity.
In kindness,
Daniel
Jade, may the new year and new decade bring you health, happiness and prosperity.
In kindness,
Daniel
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Re: Re. Mole 16.
31st Dec 2019 9:26am
Gosh, Daniel... you have indeed been kind to me during this year, so thoughtful, and sharing your insight. And even now, with my conceptual form of the Moles I discovered, it’s even fun for me to see how you’ve taken to them. Words expressed in any permutation has still yet to be exhausted, and personally, I don’t think they can be, as long as poets exist.
My warmest wishes for 2020, Daniel, my friend.
ever,
Jadey
Mole Queen 👸🏻
My warmest wishes for 2020, Daniel, my friend.
ever,
Jadey
Mole Queen 👸🏻
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Re: Re. Mole 16.
I knew it! I hoped too, but, I /knew/ I’d see you here... I even let oot a sqweeee when I got the notification, and here you are, Mr Ethan, Esq. MBE!🎖🦔
I’m loving the way different bits are found, to put together, interlocking and bridging all that’s possible... and then sharing it with me!
I’ll keep diggin’ till the Deep is like one giant Mole farm!
And I must be startin’ to recover (this has been a rough month), cause when you’re terrible sick and can’t eat for weeks, you can’t dig - nor write Moles.
See you in 2020!
Jadey, Mole Queen 👑
I’m loving the way different bits are found, to put together, interlocking and bridging all that’s possible... and then sharing it with me!
I’ll keep diggin’ till the Deep is like one giant Mole farm!
And I must be startin’ to recover (this has been a rough month), cause when you’re terrible sick and can’t eat for weeks, you can’t dig - nor write Moles.
See you in 2020!
Jadey, Mole Queen 👑
Re. Mole 16.
31st Dec 2019 4:05pm
Oh Jade - mind boggling yet freeing. There's always been a part of the poet in me who loves minimalism. And done in this form let's the reader fly in all four directions. :)
(and seeing it ona large computer monitor I have NO issues with my eyes not being able to see the words!
blessed and blessings
Kathy
(and seeing it ona large computer monitor I have NO issues with my eyes not being able to see the words!
blessed and blessings
Kathy
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Re: Re. Mole 16.
1st Jan 2020 6:18am
Aaw thank you, dear Kathy... and yes! You’re right about how freeing it is, with nothing set in stone!
ever
Jade,
Mole Queen 👑
ever
Jade,
Mole Queen 👑