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Is it the end?
Christmas tree lights so bright.
One more day, another fight
We should just move on!
Shan't be missed once gone,
The futureless life As man and wife
So much quarrel and strife
We drag and pull so much
How did we lose our touch
One more day, another fight
We should just move on!
Shan't be missed once gone,
The futureless life As man and wife
So much quarrel and strife
We drag and pull so much
How did we lose our touch
Published 25th Dec 2019
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Hey there, I enjoyed your little heart-filled poem.
Fighting really does take a big toll on your emotions... Fighting on the holidays is even worse. If you can't sort out your differences, it is the end. The solution resides with both sides... It's up to both of you.
Anyway, happy holidays, and best wishes to you!
Fighting really does take a big toll on your emotions... Fighting on the holidays is even worse. If you can't sort out your differences, it is the end. The solution resides with both sides... It's up to both of you.
Anyway, happy holidays, and best wishes to you!
25th Dec 2019 00:42am
Maybe, you need to take her away for a weekend, or a mini vacation to some place to reignite the fire that seems to have been temporarily extinguished; no doubt through other responsibilities.
It’ll give you both a chance to rekindle that spark that drew you both together.
Divorce, should never be an option unless it’s beyond the point of salvaging.
I feel the pain radiating from your words, and it’s somewhat distressing.
It’ll give you both a chance to rekindle that spark that drew you both together.
Divorce, should never be an option unless it’s beyond the point of salvaging.
I feel the pain radiating from your words, and it’s somewhat distressing.
25th Dec 2019 12:16pm
