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My Christmas Wish
As I write this piece,
I wish to find peace,
Start with myself first,
Then the universe,
And my mind at ease.
I wish to find peace,
Start with myself first,
Then the universe,
And my mind at ease.
Published 23rd Dec 2019
Author's Note
For the Cafe Critique 4 - QUINTAIN comp.
At my age, material gifts have changed meaning.
At my age, material gifts have changed meaning.
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24th Dec 2019 00:02am
What a sweet and beautiful wish. May you find the peace you are seeking this holiday season :)
28th Dec 2019 11:09pm
Thank you NewBeginnings.
I think wisdom is up there too, along with patience to deal with the obstacles and situations going on in life, but that takes work.
I think wisdom is up there too, along with patience to deal with the obstacles and situations going on in life, but that takes work.
29th Dec 2019 3:57am
24th Dec 2019 00:07am
This is selfless and reflects the true spirit of Christmas. Happiest of Christmases to you and yours, Wally! 🎄❤
29th Dec 2019 3:26am
Thank you Ahavati (and for the RL too).
Wishing during this season and throughout the year, and to those around me.
Wishing during this season and throughout the year, and to those around me.
Anonymous
24th Dec 2019 00:24am
Inner peace radiates outward as a gift to others.
Have a Holly Jolly Wally Christmas!
Have a Holly Jolly Wally Christmas!
29th Dec 2019 3:31am
Thank you Johnny.
Not to sound cliche but change starts with me first, and it's something that I know i have to work for.
Not to sound cliche but change starts with me first, and it's something that I know i have to work for.
24th Dec 2019 4:42am
29th Dec 2019 3:33am
Thank you Honoria,
Not just peace but wisdom and patience for everyone else.
Not just peace but wisdom and patience for everyone else.
