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The Lion & the Lamb
Innate kinetics ignite in each touch of white lighted heat between the virile masculine and grace filled feminine.
It's a feverish choreography; passion's friction skates for deep seeded need, ending in adrenalized constrictions.
Tender is the sweetest of sensibilities, where savage ammunition has the agile abilities to serenade china cup fragility.
Each nuance pours out sighs of seduction; sin'sations temptations, palming hands mapping out destinations.
Desirous greed surges through the length of his hardening impatience, as creamed persuasion gathers within her silken honeyed hips.
To be continued... shifting in tangled sheets of their scented blend...
Surrendered...conquered; deep seeded need completed.
Written by
PandoraUnleashed
Published 21st Dec 2019
| Edited 6th Jul 2020
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Re. The Lion & the Lamb
21st Dec 2019 10:16am
A choreography of language to lead the reader on the dance. Your sensual detail is in top form. You don't miss a beat in this melody of desire unfurled with deepening strokes of sensual fire. You are among passion's ivy league with the linguistic powerhouse. Love what you do with words and how they affect me so deeply.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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Re: Re. The Lion & the Lamb
22nd Dec 2019 00:17am
Thank you ever kindly, John. It's so nice to know I have held onto some type of linguistic anything. I truly hadn't wished to write again... 'til the seed was planted with this baby. I didn't expect to end up here either, but after reading you just now, I'm glad that I showed up.;) So grateful for your words & add. <3
Re. The Lion & the Lamb
21st Dec 2019 10:42am
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22nd Dec 2019 00:18am
Re. The Lion & the Lamb
21st Dec 2019 1:46pm
What a poem to appease the hiatus. Standout verse being "Tender is..." Also enjoyed feverish choreography, friction skates and of course, hardening impatience - all elements needed for the scented blend. Lovely write!
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Re: Re. The Lion & the Lamb
22nd Dec 2019 00:19am
Thanks for the review & kindness, buddy.
"What a poem to appease the hiatus." was wonderful, as this just popped up out of nowhere!
"What a poem to appease the hiatus." was wonderful, as this just popped up out of nowhere!
Re: Re. The Lion & the Lamb
22nd Dec 2019 5:39am
Often the best experience of composing a poem. The immediate rush of inspiration is always a treat.
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Anonymous
21st Dec 2019 2:49pm
Gorgeous
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22nd Dec 2019 00:31am
Re. The Lion & the Lamb
21st Dec 2019 5:52pm
a christmas feast of sensual language unveiling tantalizing visions of sugar plums dancing before my (inner) eyes...nice to read you again PU
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22nd Dec 2019 00:32am
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21st Dec 2019 6:11pm
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22nd Dec 2019 00:32am
Re. The Lion & the Lamb
21st Dec 2019 7:13pm
Welcome back, Dear Pandora! You arrived laden with your box overflowing with sensual treasures. Oh this stanza sent me over the moon with tingles. Bravisima sweet poet!
"Desirous greed surges through the length of his hardening impatience, as creamed persuasion gathers within her silken honeyed hips."
"Desirous greed surges through the length of his hardening impatience, as creamed persuasion gathers within her silken honeyed hips."
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Re: Re. The Lion & the Lamb
22nd Dec 2019 00:35am
Ah, thank you for such a welcoming sight of words bestowed on me, your add too. I figured that passage would get YOU! We'll see if I keep it up, the passion hasn't even been there, it surprised me to bubble up like it did.;) <3
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23rd Dec 2019 00:15am
I know the feeling.... nothing's been bubbling up for me lately. Ee can try to recover together 😁 BTW, is magnificent in it's eroticism.
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Re. The Lion & the Lamb
21st Dec 2019 8:02pm
Hot sensuous piece. Favourite line - apart from the one instanced by Gahdess -
It's a feverish choreography; passion's friction skates for deep seeded need, ending in adrenalized constrictions.
It's a feverish choreography; passion's friction skates for deep seeded need, ending in adrenalized constrictions.
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22nd Dec 2019 00:39am
I always love knowing the lines that click with people. Thank you for always allowing that indulgence, Solomon. I'm so pleased you liked both references. May you have a blessed Christmas if we're not back here any sooner!
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Re: Re. The Lion & the Lamb
22nd Dec 2019 00:41am
Thank you for allowing me to know I awakened with the usual goals of old & the gift of the add, Danny!
Re. The Lion & the Lamb
22nd Dec 2019 6:42am
I missed you Ma'm since we last talked in a comment on your poem. I wonder where were you? And after long wait I got a chance to read you now. You are always like an inspiration for me ...
Amazing piece of art. Loved it!!🖤🖤🖤
Amazing piece of art. Loved it!!🖤🖤🖤
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I can't thank you enough, your words humble me. I'm truly sorry to let you down. You were are so full of potential
( English your only hindrance) and it's in my greatest hopes that you're still here. I needed a breather, but left instead. Keep creating, my lovely one; it's within you! I so wish i come across you, that you haven't left us when you were looking for direction and a supportive figure. *fingers crossed*💖
( English your only hindrance) and it's in my greatest hopes that you're still here. I needed a breather, but left instead. Keep creating, my lovely one; it's within you! I so wish i come across you, that you haven't left us when you were looking for direction and a supportive figure. *fingers crossed*💖
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22nd Dec 2019 6:54am
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17th Feb 2020 7:18am
Thank you kindly, Miss Rachel. I hope you're still here creating your magic!💖
Re. The Lion & the Lamb
22nd Dec 2019 1:16pm
loved this piece so sensual as it is inviting for the skin of the flesh...nicely composed poetess
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17th Feb 2020 7:21am
I appreciate your kindness as always, Stoney..your words & the add. ❤
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17th Feb 2020 11:34am
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Re: Re. The Lion & the Lamb
17th Feb 2020 7:24am
Thank you, my dear friend. I'm honored by your kindness, but more so, can't wait to read you again. You became a favorite so quickly!
Re. The Lion & the Lamb
31st Dec 2019 5:07am
Very sexy, and extremely well written... you're a talented poetess, Pandora <3
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Re: Re. The Lion & the Lamb
17th Feb 2020 7:29am
Thank you, NB! I apologize for my late reply, but my absence has been greater than my presence. I'm hoping to fix that, just gotta find the soul in this place again!;) I'm in debt to many people whose work I need to visit & I will grace your pages soon!
Re. The Lion & the Lamb
The Lion & The Lamb are great pubs down south in sunny 'ol England.
Come visit me with your hubby sometime. ;-)
Come visit me with your hubby sometime. ;-)
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