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I SAW MY LOVE RISE

I saw my love rise from the sea,    
like a manly Aphrodite.  
Sight made me hot while he got cool:    
sea water streaming down his tool,    
giving a lustre to his skin,    
as he eyed me with cheeky grin,    
    
I could not help my blushful smile    
as he turned back to his swim style;    
his bottom cheeks looked so shiny    
above surface of the briny,    
with that tattoo - looking cheeky -    
he got  just after meeting me.    
   
I soon felt unfair to my One    
that I was keeping something on    
and also I was missing out    
on joys of swimming without clout    
he was happily embracing,    
setting my heart keenly racing.    
   
Time to give him a distraction    
with some siren-like attraction!
My body cried encouragement    
to let go of past sentiment.    
I flung my cossie on the shore,    
able to keep it on no more.....    
   
I ran to join him in the surf.    
My first nude swim felt like rebirth;    
after initial stab of cold    
a warmth set in, of me took hold.    
I'd never seen him smile so wide    
when my head appeared near his side.    
   
Through water, I bid he look down,    
to see my nipples and bush brown,    
while I danced on-spot water tread    
immersed to just below my head,    
as I looked down towards his thighs,    
discerning an increasing size....
Written by Solomon_Song
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