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Again, into the Plush
Feathered layers of your hair
more precious
than my infantile blanketed obsessions
You lull me in
to senseless enchantment
with your pleasured hums into my soul
In this moment
I smoothe those tendered locks in my palms
there's none that I envy
in the happiest world of fairy tales
Caramelize
the glaze of my heart
your wondrous whispers of sweetened breathes
my wistful conscience, so delicate
every inch of me tense to your beating
Don't move, my darling
as you lay on my surrendered laps
I'm hopeless, yet again
a complete defeat
Into cotton candid love...
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Re: Re. Again, into the Plush
19th Dec 2019 7:06am
Re. Again, into the Plush
19th Dec 2019 6:45am
Re: Re. Again, into the Plush
19th Dec 2019 7:08am
Glad my words can move your heart even a bit!
Thank you for your lovely visit <3
H
Thank you for your lovely visit <3
H
Re. Again, into the Plush
19th Dec 2019 7:25am
Very beautiful imagery ♡ This is indeed the good side of love. Lovely write xox
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Re: Re. Again, into the Plush
19th Dec 2019 7:29am
Thank you so much ~!
Yes how love could be so sweet in the good ....
I’m charmed by your sweet visit thank you! <3
H
Yes how love could be so sweet in the good ....
I’m charmed by your sweet visit thank you! <3
H
Re. Again, into the Plush
19th Dec 2019 7:30am
Re: Re. Again, into the Plush
19th Dec 2019 7:35am
Re. Again, into the Plush
Anonymous
- Edited 19th Dec 2019 7:56am
19th Dec 2019 7:55am
You have chosen your words so well! (I like the "cotton candid love" phrase! It ties in nicely with the hair and blanket analogies and the whole "fluffy" sub-theme of the piece!
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Re: Re. Again, into the Plush
19th Dec 2019 8:02am
Thank you ...!
Your awesome comment.
I truly am grateful.
I tried to somehow fit the ideas together lol.
<3
H
Your awesome comment.
I truly am grateful.
I tried to somehow fit the ideas together lol.
<3
H
Re: Re. Again, into the Plush
Anonymous
19th Dec 2019 8:05am
You did an excellent job! Sometimes my poetry does not keep to its theme...yours does and uses many textures to do it!
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Re. Again, into the Plush
19th Dec 2019 10:40am
Wow... a powerfully moving yet tender sense of being loved... brilliant my friend! 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾✌🏾
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Re: Re. Again, into the Plush
19th Dec 2019 1:20pm
Re. Again, into the Plush
19th Dec 2019 1:08pm
Re: Re. Again, into the Plush
19th Dec 2019 1:23pm
I didn’t see that this piece could connect to that ... lol
I do love little kittens.
I was writing about me being sweetened about the man laying his head on my lap.
I guess I was focused on expressing the internal feelings that the situation must’ve seemed a bit hazy
Thank you so much for your visit!
<3
H
I do love little kittens.
I was writing about me being sweetened about the man laying his head on my lap.
I guess I was focused on expressing the internal feelings that the situation must’ve seemed a bit hazy
Thank you so much for your visit!
<3
H
Re. Again, into the Plush
19th Dec 2019 2:46pm
Re: Re. Again, into the Plush
19th Dec 2019 3:07pm
Thanks to the friendly part of community such as you and all the wonderful poets & poetess ... the inspiration and sweetness...!
I’m very grateful of your visit.
I genuinely thank you ❤️
H
I’m very grateful of your visit.
I genuinely thank you ❤️
H
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
19th Dec 2019 4:20pm
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Re: Re. Again, into the Plush
Dear didi,
Thank you so much for taking your time to read on my page...
I’ve quite some transformations and changes as a part of my emotional journey ... some that I’m proud of, some that I’m a bit insecure about.
But you seem to appreciate a piece of me that I’ve bravely shared here in this wonderful community.
I thank you so much!
Your sweet compliments and open mindedness.
<3
H
Thank you so much for taking your time to read on my page...
I’ve quite some transformations and changes as a part of my emotional journey ... some that I’m proud of, some that I’m a bit insecure about.
But you seem to appreciate a piece of me that I’ve bravely shared here in this wonderful community.
I thank you so much!
Your sweet compliments and open mindedness.
<3
H
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
19th Dec 2019 9:43pm
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Re. Again, into the Plush
19th Dec 2019 5:40pm
Magic flows from your pen in the pure lushness of love flying like an untethered kite into the heights of passion. My darling poet friend you have enchanted my very body and soul. XoXoXo John
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Re: Re. Again, into the Plush
19th Dec 2019 7:50pm
Your words truly do sweeten me..
with the way you read and write of my works !
Thank you so very much ... graciously.
I appreciate deeply your support and visits. ❤️
H
with the way you read and write of my works !
Thank you so very much ... graciously.
I appreciate deeply your support and visits. ❤️
H
Re. Again, into the Plush
19th Dec 2019 6:18pm
Re: Re. Again, into the Plush
19th Dec 2019 7:51pm
Thank you so much!
You see through my ink!
I greatly appreciate your visit.
♥️
H
You see through my ink!
I greatly appreciate your visit.
♥️
H
Re. Again, into the Plush
20th Dec 2019 5:20pm
Lovely emanations of passion and tenderness throughout your write, which has a sultry and tender flow.
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Re: Re. Again, into the Plush
21st Dec 2019 1:39am
Re. Again, into the Plush
22nd Dec 2019 11:21pm
Re. Again, into the Plush
23rd Dec 2019 3:21am
Extremely beautiful and touching... As well as incredibly well written. You did a wonderful job with this one, H. You have quite the way with words 😊
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