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All I Want for Christmas is...
Rose stained sheets
on a thin layer of white delicate cotton
they paint my innocence as certain
as the virginity of lust crazed hooker
Leaked puddle of early Christmas snow
came too soon in an eve before the eve, melted
a present so cocky in Santa's affirmed bag of pride
his package wasn't amusing
but his bags
were surely full of his jolly unholy
Underneath my Christmas tree
I don't need glorified boxes filled with empty "pleasures"
Find no joy in stockings stuffed with horny minty candy cane
Just give me the love what Christmas spirit sings of
The lights and warmth of a fireplace
And a sip of rich hot cocoa
Published 18th Dec 2019
Author's Note
Merry...Christmas...
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Anonymous
18th Dec 2019 5:07pm
A wonderful piece of erotica! Well conceived, well formatted, well expressed with emotion and depth!
18th Dec 2019 5:13pm
thank you for your awesome friendly feedback :)
I am slowly progressing into the world of writing as a form of art.
I simply enjoy expressing.
Emotion all the way!
<3
H
I am slowly progressing into the world of writing as a form of art.
I simply enjoy expressing.
Emotion all the way!
<3
H
19th Dec 2019 7:39am
This is very sweet and sensual. Merry Christmas; I really enjoyed this gift of poetry you shared xox
19th Dec 2019 7:54am
It is my pleasure ~! ❤️
I truly appreciate your sweet visits as well :)
H
I truly appreciate your sweet visits as well :)
H
19th Dec 2019 5:45pm
Your Christmas vision dances like sugar plums in my dreams. The birth of passion was never more heated than between the stanzas of your spread words. XoXoXo John
19th Dec 2019 7:57pm
Thank you so much John!
Your visits and appreciation of my words really is the best thing what I as a “poet” could ever ask for.
Your visions are sweeter than the fairies ❤️
H
Your visits and appreciation of my words really is the best thing what I as a “poet” could ever ask for.
Your visions are sweeter than the fairies ❤️
H
20th Dec 2019 2:05am
21st Dec 2019 1:41am
Thank you dear J!
:)
I am truly grateful for your support and and time in my works.
So much <3
H
:)
I am truly grateful for your support and and time in my works.
So much <3
H
20th Dec 2019 2:14am
21st Dec 2019 1:42am
Omgoodness, I enjoyed this with such a silly smirk & warmth in my soul. You write beautifully; naughty, humorous & the true meaning/spirit of Christmas wrapped in a pretty pieced package..how epic! You gained a new fan. It appears you're a returning presence, so welcome back & Merry Christmas!❤
Btw: loved this so much......
"his package wasn't amusing
but his bags
were surely full of his jolly unholy "👌
Killer opening stanza too, damn you're good!
Btw: loved this so much......
"his package wasn't amusing
but his bags
were surely full of his jolly unholy "👌
Killer opening stanza too, damn you're good!
