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Remember when.

Once a inquisitive mind
Now dead inside
Where the fire once lit
Is a awful grey pit.

Such a inquisitive soul
The passion has gone
It's a bottomless hole
When the fire once shone.

Now a aching body
But so young and frail
The drink took its toll
yellow and pail
Written by BigG
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