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the face
a haunted expression stare at me
I created him
this man haggard and tired
where is he from
and why is he troubled?
would I ever create something
born of my inner calm
or was I the haunted face I saw?
Published 7th Dec 2019
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7th Dec 2019 00:39am
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7th Dec 2019 11:42am
the mind can manifest all thoughts into view of the eyes sometimes creating illusions from once upon a time nicely composed poetess...respect
9th Dec 2019 9:34pm
The psychological aspect of this piece is very interesting. The reader is left to decide whether the narrator is in a difficult relationship with a second person or merely haunted by her own passions. It evokes the image of a troubled woman staring into a mirror.
11th Dec 2019 4:50pm
thank you graciously dearest Jack the graphics here are of my own design in it I see a haunted man...I thought perhaps he was really a reflection of my inner personage...I deeply appreciate your thoughts on this write...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
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2nd Jan 2020 7:37pm
dearest Didi thank you with all my heart for sharing that with me today that's one of the most beautiful thoughts I think that has ever been shared with me here... I hope you have a beautiful day today...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
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