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who do i think i am?
think? i know:
i am dust and starbrites
collective consciousness of nanoseconds
a cumulative mass of memories
responses-past of physical
and emotional
stimuli
i am
white-water and the sunlit stream
waves and rain and colder condensations
i am prism
mirror
pupilled iris and lake's surface
—way-station of oxygen
human-manufacturer of other, older gases
i am the electric spark of life
the pump and slew of bodily parts
their flex and calcification
the untold power of a mind
that lives beyond parameters of flesh
i am the hand held out
the shoulder
the soft heart and the wise
bender not breaker
adapter-survivor
honed where once blunt
tempered by trials
stripped naked
—the learner of lessons—
i clothe myself in light and shade
of my own choosing,
in humility, honesty & understanding
aware of my own faults
i am
celebrant of humanity
judge of transgressions
the mouthpiece and the scales
in balance
in justice
in honour and in truth
for it matters
to me
who. i. am
Written by
butters
Published 6th Dec 2019
| Edited 8th Dec 2019
Author's Note
for the 'who do you think you are?' challenge
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. who do i think i am?
6th Dec 2019 6:13pm
Re. who do i think i am?
6th Dec 2019 6:21pm
dearest Butters this is simply amazing
beautiful writing poet...
love Brenda 🌹
beautiful writing poet...
love Brenda 🌹
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aw, thanks, crimsin [flower]
i'm at one with the universe, being part of it, one tiny teeny speck but vital, as are all components. when i die, i'm perfectly content to return to my origins. :)
ty for the r.l entry!
i'm at one with the universe, being part of it, one tiny teeny speck but vital, as are all components. when i die, i'm perfectly content to return to my origins. :)
ty for the r.l entry!
Re. who do i think i am?
6th Dec 2019 6:40pm
An excellent entry, butters. Very well written; I honestly have no honest critique.
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6th Dec 2019 6:46pm
*nana dance*
thanks, sweet girl, for the read/comment and r.l entry. appreciated x
it might come across as if i think a lot of myself, but i am more than aware of my own faults; i've learned to understand exactly who i am, through time and trials of fire. honesty's my watchword--which is why the people who jumped on me when i first arrived got it all SO wrong. i can forgive, but i don't forget--these things i learn from.
thanks, sweet girl, for the read/comment and r.l entry. appreciated x
it might come across as if i think a lot of myself, but i am more than aware of my own faults; i've learned to understand exactly who i am, through time and trials of fire. honesty's my watchword--which is why the people who jumped on me when i first arrived got it all SO wrong. i can forgive, but i don't forget--these things i learn from.
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Re. who do i think i am?
7th Dec 2019 8:20pm
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7th Dec 2019 8:32pm
glad you found something in it
it really is an honest representation of me: i can be the most helpful, understanding and kind person but also (in cases of injustice) VERY judgemental, unapologetically!
it really is an honest representation of me: i can be the most helpful, understanding and kind person but also (in cases of injustice) VERY judgemental, unapologetically!
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7th Dec 2019 9:08pm
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7th Dec 2019 9:42pm
Re. who do i think i am?
9th Dec 2019 3:18am
Dear B,
Wonderful! Excellent write. To know thy self. A gift for sure. Good luck in the comp. For sure this is a knock out entry. H🌷
Wonderful! Excellent write. To know thy self. A gift for sure. Good luck in the comp. For sure this is a knock out entry. H🌷
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9th Dec 2019 4:51am
aw, H, i'm really happy you enjoyed it. thankyou x
there have been a LOT of lessons along the way for me to get to where i am now in understanding myself and accepting myself for who i am. still, in 10 years time i may have to write a totally new piece :D people change but, for now, this is my truth.
there have been a LOT of lessons along the way for me to get to where i am now in understanding myself and accepting myself for who i am. still, in 10 years time i may have to write a totally new piece :D people change but, for now, this is my truth.
Re. who do i think i am?
This poem has been nominated for Poem of the Month, December 2019! Best of luck!
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11154/#462452
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11154/#462452
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9th Dec 2019 4:53am
wow! thanks, PR. appreciate you letting me know and this way people can go visit the competition pages too! i should have thought of doing it this way but was relying on PMs.
ty x
ty x
Re: Re. who do i think i am?
9th Dec 2019 5:04am
You're welcome! I actually just copy and pasted this same comment sent to me by Ahavati on my nominated poem, so it was really her idea to include the link..
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Re. who do i think i am?
21st Jan 2020 2:43pm
The most gorgeous poem Ms. Butters.
You had my vote in the comp when i read it first, then came back to it again after reading all the other poems in that comp. It's delicate yet full of strength and the visual, the imagery is simply magnificent.
You had my vote in the comp when i read it first, then came back to it again after reading all the other poems in that comp. It's delicate yet full of strength and the visual, the imagery is simply magnificent.
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29th Jan 2020 6:53pm