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Hell
Today i saw hell
Decorated and painted
with a light fixture
That dangle from orage sky laced with diamonds that light the way there
glitter sprinkled from flames like camp fires in fables, howels of pain drowned inside of a trap playlist.
Lava with blue dye looks like a jacuzzi lake. The throne was a recliner that a hooded man layed in. Offerings all the souls a comfortable place to stay.
While half naked ladies served drinks and shots from a gold plate. Some even offered to lay with you only if you stayed.
Some unzipped your pants and tasted you sucking your soul away. Time was slower than waiting for spot in drivers ed. I waited for the April fools but no one ever said it. Plus is wasn't April too. We're here everyday enjoying rotten fruits wearing ripe costume layers.
Today i saw a diamond ficture split a soul in half with the beams of light gleaming off the dimonds rays in every direction glitter burned the flesh on the souls dancing to air the music was cut and replaced with agonizing cries for help. Souls bones filleted inside the jacuzzi bath. The half naked ladies grew spiked parts and started to impale them. They all tried to pray but no one answered their prayers except the hooded man on the throne laughing out now that your trapped WELCOME TO HELL NOTHING CAN SAVE YOU NOW.
Decorated and painted
with a light fixture
That dangle from orage sky laced with diamonds that light the way there
glitter sprinkled from flames like camp fires in fables, howels of pain drowned inside of a trap playlist.
Lava with blue dye looks like a jacuzzi lake. The throne was a recliner that a hooded man layed in. Offerings all the souls a comfortable place to stay.
While half naked ladies served drinks and shots from a gold plate. Some even offered to lay with you only if you stayed.
Some unzipped your pants and tasted you sucking your soul away. Time was slower than waiting for spot in drivers ed. I waited for the April fools but no one ever said it. Plus is wasn't April too. We're here everyday enjoying rotten fruits wearing ripe costume layers.
Today i saw a diamond ficture split a soul in half with the beams of light gleaming off the dimonds rays in every direction glitter burned the flesh on the souls dancing to air the music was cut and replaced with agonizing cries for help. Souls bones filleted inside the jacuzzi bath. The half naked ladies grew spiked parts and started to impale them. They all tried to pray but no one answered their prayers except the hooded man on the throne laughing out now that your trapped WELCOME TO HELL NOTHING CAN SAVE YOU NOW.
Published 3rd Dec 2019
| Edited 7th Dec 2019
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25th Dec 2019 6:48am
Very interesting (captivating) metaphor, here!!
& despite the overall msg, i liked the spill
& despite the overall msg, i liked the spill
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26th Dec 2019 5:24am
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26th Dec 2019 11:52am
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Dec 2021 2:45am
2nd Feb 2020 11:17pm
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The overall message is the daily perception of hell is misleading. Hell is decorated like its a party with all of the luxuries until your trapped and then the party turns into an endless existence being tortured. Hell is a personal experience not a lake of fire with a pitch fork holding deity but more personal a creation of your own due to negative energy increasing after death.
