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Poetry by Touch
It’s gradually giving me the news in stages,
In phases that gently come and go at first sight.
As if this way it hopes like others going blind,
I’ll recognize respect it’s showing me in time.
When it comes to my having senses up till now,
I’ve had advantages for all these many years.
I should feel lucky and of course sometimes I do;
The irony: going deaf sounds better to me.
I mean no pun intended in what I’ve just said,
For all of us, here and gone, it’s a luxury.
It’s not by birthright giving me a choice to make,
By faith, I’m a believer, in the hands of God.
There still is time to do the things I love to do.
It is the air in trees & sky, the breeze & hush;
A cherish’d walk & talks by moonlit rendezvous,
And poetry to write, to read aloud to him.
When I thank him for the difficult things in life,
Suddenly they are no longer as difficult.
Written by
Heaven_sent_Kathy
Published 3rd Dec 2019
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Re. Poetry by Touch
Anonymous
3rd Dec 2019 2:50am
"The irony: going deaf sounds better to me."
Gritty poeticism, Kathy. And I would agree. As it is my nose rarely works more than a few days out of a year.
Gritty poeticism, Kathy. And I would agree. As it is my nose rarely works more than a few days out of a year.
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Hi JohnnyBlaze -
I'm not sure the analogy being made here regarding your nose, though it sounds chronic on your part, like a severe sinus infection. But I thank you for your stopping by for a read all the same.
All the best for the holidays,
Kathy
I'm not sure the analogy being made here regarding your nose, though it sounds chronic on your part, like a severe sinus infection. But I thank you for your stopping by for a read all the same.
All the best for the holidays,
Kathy
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Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Dec 2019 11:12am
3rd Dec 2019 11:11am
It's just a sense I've become accustomed to living without, so I can somewhat relate to the issue. I pray for your sake that your condition is something that can be reversed or at least compensated with utilizing modern technologies.
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27th Dec 2019 00:55am
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3rd Dec 2019 9:34am
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3rd Dec 2019 9:43am
THank you very much Sarah for your appreciation and support, and welcome to DUP.
blessed and blessings
Kathy
blessed and blessings
Kathy
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12th Dec 2019 5:24am
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12th Dec 2019 5:24am
hey I love to write as well, have my own poetry so please check my site too :)
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Re. Poetry by Touch
3rd Dec 2019 11:36am
BEAUTIFULLY COMPOSED POETESS VERY UPLIFTING FOR THROUGH HIM ALL IS MADE POSSIBLE IN THIS LIFE OF LOVE AND UNDERSTANDING...RESPECT
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27th Dec 2019 00:54am
Thank you so much dear Stoney for your insight and thoughtfulness.
blessed and blessings
Kathy
blessed and blessings
Kathy
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27th Dec 2019 11:37am
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3rd Dec 2019 9:58pm
"When I thank him for the difficult things in life,
Suddenly they are no longer as difficult."
... 'A problem shared is a problem halved' as my mother used to say. I hope it feels that way. Hugs, Josh.
Suddenly they are no longer as difficult."
... 'A problem shared is a problem halved' as my mother used to say. I hope it feels that way. Hugs, Josh.
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27th Dec 2019 00:57am
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6th Dec 2019 4:16pm
There is a purity of emotion in this confessional style write that I find enchanting.
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27th Dec 2019 00:59am
Thank you very much Daniel. Even in crisis there can be an overwhelming of grace from his Spirit.
blessed and blessings
Kathy
blessed and blessings
Kathy
Re. Poetry by Touch
8th Dec 2019 2:53am
This poem has been nominated for Poem of the Month, December 2017! Best of luck!
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11154/#462452
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11154/#462452
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Thank you dear One - I'm very honored by this. No matter how the outcome (which is now in) - to have it nominated among such stellar works astounds me. My best to you and yours for the New Years. xo
blessed and blessings
Kathy
p.s. btw, I adore your new avatar image (yours & his) :)
blessed and blessings
Kathy
p.s. btw, I adore your new avatar image (yours & his) :)
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27th Dec 2019 1:07am
Much Love and Happiness for the New Year, Kathy! A miracle is in process now! xo
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8th Dec 2019 3:14am
This is an interesting topic, I'd like to suggest #deafness as a theme, since your poem themes are set to private I'm not sure how to but I think you can request it on your own poem, other poets have written about this topic too. This is a compelling write..
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Thank you PR for your kind words.
As for the hashtag suggestion - the mentioning of preferring being deaf was a tongue-in-cheek by me over the blindness that's gradually been setting in.
Be well dear Poetess.
As for the hashtag suggestion - the mentioning of preferring being deaf was a tongue-in-cheek by me over the blindness that's gradually been setting in.
Be well dear Poetess.