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Gang Bang
Dark room
Skin bare
Bath warm
Ogle porn
Body keen
Fair game
Can't wait
Unrestrained
Don't hold back
Gang Bang
Hard-core
Rump tilt
Slam, Cuff, Blow
Time done
Want more
Waiting...
Commence encore
Skin bare
Bath warm
Ogle porn
Body keen
Fair game
Can't wait
Unrestrained
Don't hold back
Gang Bang
Hard-core
Rump tilt
Slam, Cuff, Blow
Time done
Want more
Waiting...
Commence encore
Published 1st Dec 2019
| Edited 2nd May 2021
Author's Note
This is not a reflection on my sex life although some may think that... 4-word fun :)
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
1st Dec 2019 8:48am
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Anonymous
1st Dec 2019 9:36am
Accurate reflection or not, the piece was very well expressed!
1st Dec 2019 12:22pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
7th Dec 2019 10:59am
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13th Dec 2019 2:09pm
4th Jan 2020 6:23am
2nd May 2021 6:33pm
omg i like the expression of hunger and how you create so many images in such short lines
2nd May 2021 7:11pm
Stright and to the point. No word wasted. Just the way I like. Kisses, Robert.
3rd May 2021 1:09am
Let the unconscious play.
I am just a beginner and way too wordy and clumsy. At this stage rhyming is mostly a personal therapeutic outlet and I am grateful I can do that here in a safe space. I also read a lot of the poems from other people to get inspired and earn. Maybe one day I can write for the pleasure of others and myself.
So far, your style and talent inspires me the most. You have exactly what I am missing and my wife urges me: come to the point.
It slowly dawns to me that the best poetry uses the fewest words. That's the art form.
Thank you.
I am just a beginner and way too wordy and clumsy. At this stage rhyming is mostly a personal therapeutic outlet and I am grateful I can do that here in a safe space. I also read a lot of the poems from other people to get inspired and earn. Maybe one day I can write for the pleasure of others and myself.
So far, your style and talent inspires me the most. You have exactly what I am missing and my wife urges me: come to the point.
It slowly dawns to me that the best poetry uses the fewest words. That's the art form.
Thank you.
3rd May 2021 1:43am
Wow, thank you. If you would like to PM me to get some feedback on your writing i'd be more than happy to help.
4th May 2021 4:46am
1st Jan 2022 2:12pm
Hello Joy,
The accurate detail of a place, environment and perfect emotions that flare up. I was monogamous in my approach. But I was reminded time and again that woman is not a monogamous. She loves, she deserves and she wants to be served. Man is to serve her passion, sensuality and sexuality. My friends found gang-bang is the best way to take away your anger, apprehensions and take down your guards. Above all never feel guilty when it comes to sex. Sex is not ultimate end, it is a mean to achieve the end. Well expressed feelings. It may not be your sex life but nothing is wrong to indulge for a change.
I hold you in high esteem,
KS
The accurate detail of a place, environment and perfect emotions that flare up. I was monogamous in my approach. But I was reminded time and again that woman is not a monogamous. She loves, she deserves and she wants to be served. Man is to serve her passion, sensuality and sexuality. My friends found gang-bang is the best way to take away your anger, apprehensions and take down your guards. Above all never feel guilty when it comes to sex. Sex is not ultimate end, it is a mean to achieve the end. Well expressed feelings. It may not be your sex life but nothing is wrong to indulge for a change.
I hold you in high esteem,
KS
