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Love is a four letter word
Mind blur
Word slur
Head fuzz
Soul buzz
Gaze call
Body will fall
Eyes tell lies
True love dies
Word spar
Left scar
Won't heal
Can't feel
Weak from pain
Melt like rain
Hurt cuts
Door slam shut
Won't stop burn
Life turn
ache from sins
Soon fate wins
Word slur
Head fuzz
Soul buzz
Gaze call
Body will fall
Eyes tell lies
True love dies
Word spar
Left scar
Won't heal
Can't feel
Weak from pain
Melt like rain
Hurt cuts
Door slam shut
Won't stop burn
Life turn
ache from sins
Soon fate wins
Published 29th Nov 2019
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30th Nov 2019 9:15pm
That's pretty clever stuff with all words having four letters. And the sentiment is consistent. Good luck in the comp. Best regards, Josh.
1st Dec 2019 6:34pm
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26th Dec 2019 6:49am
Simple, but clever... Loved this little poem, but am sorry for your heartbreak!
True love never dies & that is a fact. What you had was obviously not true love. I have a friend who married in 1998 & guess what? He is in love with her even more now than he was when they first met. What does that tell ya?
11th Feb 2020 1:26am
