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FOUR
Defy hate
With love
Deny evil
Tout good
With word
Also deed
Give more
Take less
Keep true
Don't fake
Stay gold
Live life
With zest
God's hope
Your soul
Will live
Fore
Ever-More
Amen
With love
Deny evil
Tout good
With word
Also deed
Give more
Take less
Keep true
Don't fake
Stay gold
Live life
With zest
God's hope
Your soul
Will live
Fore
Ever-More
Amen
Published 28th Nov 2019
| Edited 29th Nov 2019
Author's Note
Four letter word competition submission.
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Anonymous
28th Nov 2019 8:49pm
Sharp, SnuggleB. A simple equation that some people make too complex.
30th Nov 2019 3:33am
Thanks Johnny. To be honest I wrote this on the run, during Holiday visits. Some of relatives can be a pain in the ass. So, I turned to DU and tapped this out on my phone.
Anonymous
- Edited 30th Nov 2019 11:31am
30th Nov 2019 11:29am
Oh, I hear ya loud and clear LOL What I would give to kick everyone except for Ahavati out the door and just write .....
29th Nov 2019 9:35pm
Love this call for change - wouldn't it be great if we all tried our hardest to do this :-)))))))
30th Nov 2019 3:34am
Great use of 4 letter words, clear, concise and to the point. Good luck in the competition :)
1st Dec 2019 5:28pm
Good presentation of principles to live by in (non rude) 4 letter words. The number of the title also calls to mind the four Gospel writers.
1st Dec 2019 5:29pm
2nd Dec 2019 7:59pm
27th Dec 2019 4:45pm
Solid advice, snuggle. Great message! May we all strive to be more good, loving, selfless, honest, and passionate individuals :)
5th Jan 2020 3:04pm
5th Jan 2020 9:54pm
